i don't care who you'll vote for i just want it closed and out the way.............

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Blue Print

B.P.

^^I agree...


Can we get some votes.

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..............................This Still Not Ended......................................

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breakdown:

daclassic:

It's going to take a little magic,There's no hocus pocus
I'm bout to make this Deadlyvision get his eyez focused
^^hott opener good punch 7/10
You steady thinking and typing a verse you thinking of biting
No biting, Don't take me as a peace a cake when you writing
^^lolgood meta but bad punch 5/10
Lyric incision coming through you as sharp as a cleat be
Even if you cut my legs off, You still couldn't defeat me
^^defeat me lines are played no respect for that 0/10
he's not even close to lyrical, bragging that he a miracle
I'm a have this dude retire from rapping to being spiritual
^^good wordplay strong punch 7/10
I'll baptize you for rapping religous in the shit that you wrote
If that was the case, Then I'll physically beat you into a pope
^^another good punch hott closer 8/10

overall: 27/50 (54%)

deadlyvision:

^^Kid 1st ur punches are like female hits they all sound whack/
How u claiming ur tough? is like mannequins it's all a fake act/..
Kid face it i'ma above u, skill is what u lack, Put uneven #'s in ur head to show how the odds are stacked/..
^^hott opener good wordplay and metas bad structure 7/10
Bitch I punch ya line and ya 4s-been-met....steping up 2 Me u get smacked da way bitches-get-checked/..
Only time dis kid fly is up in a bird nest, My punches will leave ur organs by ur heart now he really 'Up-Set'/..
IQ of a Genius?? I leave ya mental capacity in catastrophy, squeezin ya brain an slam ya head,I've damned-ur-cred/
^^good bar nice shyt but structure once again is off but still hott 7/10
Profane Frees,Explain Please...how the Tip of ya Dick is ur 'Main Squeeze'/..
Comin at Dv U - fag - now how u gonna spit rhymez witta Brain FreeZe/..
^^lmfao hott shyt here 8/10
It's like im throwin stones at At "blueprint", cuz I'm "rockin-yo-dome"/..
Classic? I Leave ya frame like a pocket-of-bones... u think your electrifyin? when really your "sockets-is-blown"/..
^^dam hott finisher best bar 10/10

overall: 32/40

vote: DV...overall better verse and the last 2 bars ended it

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RV's Only 3 Time Topical Tourney Champion

v/ DaClassic.

More original.. both of you came with mad played punches an concepts.. Classic less so.. `odds stack up` an `mannequins` lines were bad.. Classic flowed better an structure made it easier to follow.. DV was lookin` stretched thruout.

Vote on this:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121685

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I agree with casual....

I thought DaClassic won this one with his better flow and his punches semmed to hit a little harder. Deadly came OK but his punches seemed to lack strength. I understand it was a quickly keyed piece but I think that DaClassic's just came off a little bit harder. Also, DV's flow was off in some spots.......

Vote - DaClassic.....Sorry I couldn't help you close this but could you guys drop a vote in this battle between me and creativitie?

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...16&page=4&pp=15

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thinks for the votes but keep them coming

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Blue Print

B.P.

Ok.

UppUN>

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