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05-25-04, 10:23 PM
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Mind of the Phycotic(LoT+Wun=Collab)
IP: B682 856F
LoT Every intricate incision on his patient intrigues his nerves Hair stands on end to see the scarlet cover their throats like a scarf Mind frame long beyond the status of mentally unstable He broke free of the shackles of humanity and morals The mans reason for existence is nothing more then the love of suffering To see the ones who once stared in hatred Squeeze their eyes shut in terror To him, he is doing good to the world Exterminating the world of these virii But he is not understood, even in the small sane part of his mind They have a family, let him go Grab the knife, show them the hatred they have grown Violence is the weapon of the ignorant They never understood you, you are nothing to them You have lost touch with reality The only reality you need, is the one you live right now The lives that cause you pain, Are in your hands The futures that told you had none, are under your control Grab ahold of your conscious Stop and think Knowing the consequences, why do you persist on this? He clears his mind… And continues his work… Follow each vein with your knife. As they are your path to freedom. Connect visually, and watch his life drain Watch as his mortality drips from his fingertips ~Thy Poet~ Distressed Thought's All that Fill His Head.. He Thinks Of Raining Blood and Sky's of Red.. Massacre's Of Many Poeple Controlling his Dreams.. Dark and Deep Intrussion's of Hate Spamming his Brain.. Scream's of Pain released in Anger is he Insane.. He watche's The Horror of 9/11 and Has no Emotion.. Brain waves Heading one way to Hate Only 1 Motion.. He Cant get these Thought's Out after Many Attempt's.. He Prays for Forgiveness But Unsure if God will Redempt.. His Intintion
He walks into the School with His Evil Intintions.. With a Knife under his Jacket the Handle with Indintions.. As he passes class Rooms he Stummbles Upon a Boy.. As he Grabs his Mouth and the Gag he must now Deploy.. His good side tells him to Drop the Knife and Walk Away.. His Bad Side says Keep the Child and the Knife must Stay.. He Fights these Thoughts But the Overtake His Control.. The Child Swings somthing and He hit the Man with a Pole.. The Boy Runs into the Hallway But Closly being Chassed.. The Man Stops What is he Doing his Mind is Erased.. He steps into a CourtYard Were cops Surround Him.. He doesnt stop and as they Shoot his Light gets Dim.. As his Thoughts Fade away as His Sould is Released.. Mind Clear with No Hate or Anger bad Thoughts have Ciesed..
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05-25-04, 10:38 PM
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yawn
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IP: 06D4 9403
mmm... Up for feedback
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05-26-04, 04:33 AM
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straight poem, but i dont see what a Phycotic has to do with anything
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05-26-04, 10:24 AM
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yawn
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IP: 06D4 9403
...typo?... yeah thanks for the feedback...
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05-27-04, 10:03 PM
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yawn
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IP: 06D4 9403
Up!
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05-30-04, 12:19 AM
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IP: 4289 77F4
ummm pretty understandable...I give it a 8/10..Nice worded and stuff....liked it..It was aight
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05-30-04, 08:52 AM
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You Love My Style.
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Sick Collab. I have to say, nicely done. Props to both.
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06-05-04, 04:20 PM
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IP: F93C 3EBB
i like it a lot,real good stuuf.8/10
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06-06-04, 10:15 AM
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Dont Push Me Of Regret It
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IP: 3494 F712
v nice...word play and felin was deff the main aspects...keep it up
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