Yo lets battle B u peeps gon kick me out da crew i gotta kno if im bettah den u

U spit first
No Hate votes
no crew votes
no D/R votes
No unexplained votes

lets get it 2day B

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...i didnt pick this, sorry i gotta knock u out wit da quickness...
...Dey say Dis trick slick, Not even tylenol can cure my sickness...
...I dont mess wit hoes i jus get da Pro sluts...
...Ya 13 man crew will be left like a bakers dozen of Doughnuts...

yo valor drop a verse

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...i didnt pick this, sorry i gotta knock u out wit da quickness...
...Dey say Dis trick slick, Not even tylenol can cure my sickness...
...I dont mess wit hoes i jus get da Pro sluts...
...Ya 13 man crew will be left like a bakers dozen of Doughnuts...

checking in...and i say u spit first since u did call me out

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na i already droped da rules n erything.. go ahead

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...i didnt pick this, sorry i gotta knock u out wit da quickness...
...Dey say Dis trick slick, Not even tylenol can cure my sickness...
...I dont mess wit hoes i jus get da Pro sluts...
...Ya 13 man crew will be left like a bakers dozen of Doughnuts...

yo u gonna spit first..and atleast spit ya verse b4 5:00 my time...its 4:40

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...i didnt pick this, sorry i gotta knock u out wit da quickness...
...Dey say Dis trick slick, Not even tylenol can cure my sickness...
...I dont mess wit hoes i jus get da Pro sluts...
...Ya 13 man crew will be left like a bakers dozen of Doughnuts...

dude was once happy cus he was in mah crew and repped this.......
....hes pissed off
but then again the dude has my crew on his respect list......(wtf)(sig)

dudes best record is like he said on his ghost mc...
....hes a rookie
he probably does need a ghost writer just to defeat me.....
and using d/r is a way that would put u at risk.....
....scared to get dissed
using d/r is the only way you'll get votes on this.....
i only let u in cus black hazed done asked me....
....ur wack
vomiting on the mic is the only way u spitting nasty.....

in this battle u cannot once spit a nasty bar.....
....not nasty at all
even if that was a naked girl laying in your avvy tar.....


blah....lol

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its crazy when i spit get niggaz sick from hot shit..
i won easly so act like dis is old beef and drop it..
if ma flow was a 'Officer' u still couldnt 'Cop' dis..
n if ma punches dont connect it will still be a hot miss....

Valor dont kick somebody outa ya crew dats bettah den u....
ya Flow are cheap like u got em off a damn dolla menu....
Nigga ma flow will sweep u striaght off ya feet....
Dont talk shit Cuz..Like a 100 degree Day U cant take da "heat".... (gun)
like im n american soldier and ur a iraqi base imma hafta bomb ya....
u gonna lose dis battle like playin hide and seek wit Osama.... (bin laden)
Im tellin u im da sickest MC but nobody beleive me...
i'll blast u 6 times and give u n extra 1 cuz u greedy....
if we eva would bang out ya hands wouldnt even Reach...
If we had beef i'll leave shells on ya grass like ya house was da Beach.....
ya rhymes are a shame imma call u da loss abbuser...
nigga da only way u can get 5 votes is if dey was votin on da loser...
i'll make u lose ya life quick and boil ya brains....
Hit u wit lyrical punches and leave ya blood 2 drain....
da only way u cud win is if u got struck By luck...
Nigga imma call u vaccum cleaner cause u Jus Suck...
Me losin dis battle nigga dat will neva happen...
dats like Elton john winnin a nominee for rappin...
nigga u act hard but yo we all have Black times...
U terrorising da game because peeps eyes r burnin from readin ya wack rhymes....
imma get credit cause i get props PER WIN...
dont talk about bein nasty when u still prolly a virgin...

FIINIISHA


well u gonna get 0 votes u cant go any lower..right?...
stop hangin wit black siinz cause he made u a wack Emcee Overnight....

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...i didnt pick this, sorry i gotta knock u out wit da quickness...
...Dey say Dis trick slick, Not even tylenol can cure my sickness...
...I dont mess wit hoes i jus get da Pro sluts...
...Ya 13 man crew will be left like a bakers dozen of Doughnuts...

^^^verse bittin......no personals.....and it wqas basic and wack.......

uppin number 1

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Aight peeps good battle really enjoyed readin this time for the breakdown;

VALOR: Nice verse liked the structure wordplay punches were good never really seen a rhyming structure like that before but i liked it kept it simple but to the point...nice verse elevate a lil on the structure and u'll be even more deadly wit the rhymes.

Da Magician: Weak opener ur verse picked up but it to me was too self gloryfied the opener was basically pumpin urself up...go for the disses...nice structure i think you had Val here nice punches and personals too but u kept gloryfyin yoself and it affected ya on this occasion try and focus on the opponent instead of...i am i could i would...it let you down.

V/Valor

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uppin number 2
vote vote vote vote vote
im up 1-0

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Good battle....Breakdown for valor, your verse was ok, you had a few good punches, an ya had some decent personals, you had decent vocab, couda been stronger
Punches 7/10
Personals 6/10
Flow 5/10
Structure 4/10
Creativity 5/10
Overall: 27/50

Da magician.....man me an you cool an everything but you messed up, your verse was tight but it was to self glorying, you had a few punches, but a lot of your verse wasn't aimed at him an thats a no no in battles
Punches 5/10
Personals 2/10
Flow 6/10
Structure 6/10
Creativity 4/10
Overall 23/50
Vote Valor

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VALOR = 30/50
Flow 7/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 4/10
Humor 7/10

Da MaGiCiAn 7 = 27/50
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 5/10
Structure 4/10
Punches 6/10
Humor 6/10

VALORgot this one...he had the flow & structure to lead him..to win...

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a yo dat was a good battle yo i aint even gonn vote doggys cuz magician ma boy and valor's in ma crew but dat was a good ass battle i liked both verses doggs na mean good shyt fellaz much respek to both of ya

IM kinda feeling da magicion on this battle......just because she a girl....and she had the heart to stand up to a man lol....nah.....valor won this battle but i do nto vote againist girls so no vote but if i did valor won

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