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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
accomplishment 5 62.50%
verbal violence 3 37.50%
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Old 05-31-04, 02:06 AM   #1
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From: colorado,Ft.Morgan
verbal violence vs.. accomplishemnt

IP: D8CA 5065

yo rules as in call out u spit first aight holla back~1~
 
Old 05-31-04, 02:37 AM   #2
accomplishment
"Ya'll Must've Forgot"
 
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From: Da Nasty North
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spit urs bitch


this is a text battle, so its puzzling how you take me verbally
kid you heard of me, of course cuz i kill all, and your just and herb to me
two dashes at ends of lines this lil kid, child stylins//
this kid is rated pg, only known for mild violence//
read this verse over and over just so your heads filled wit me
cuz you battled all noobs, now try to take someone wit credibility
get yo piece of da pie, cuz wit yo skills its easy to die
bring tears to your eyes with this shit alone is simply eaten you alive
search deep kid and attempt to sum up your killer dissen
but your verse sounds to me nothin but a ken kannif intermission
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Old 05-31-04, 04:15 PM   #3
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From: colorado,Ft.Morgan
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im bout to tag my fame all over ya name//
ya lines was weak but whats to blaim//
ya knowin for ko.'s but thats about to change//
im gonna flip ya scripts make my verbs crucs ya body and break ya vertabrea//
i aint hugh heffner i dont playboy//
im gona play u like a childs toy//
cuz ur a hater plus a masterbatior flamed your ass see u later//
your luke sky walker and im darth vador//
sorry but i accidently cut your dick off with my light savor//
rappin gurls like u ill do for a favor//
maybe someday ull be a great as me but im still greater//
rappin foos like you is bordum//
i think i won now its time for you to get off da forum//
 
Old 05-31-04, 04:16 PM   #4
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From: colorado,Ft.Morgan
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aight now yall start to vote and be fare aight holla at ya boi~1~
 
Old 05-31-04, 04:35 PM   #5
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From: Da Nasty North
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uppin for some votes on dis herbish shit
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Old 05-31-04, 08:22 PM   #6
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From: colorado,Ft.Morgan
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yo yall need to voye up for realz ight holla bak~1~
 
Old 05-31-04, 09:57 PM   #7
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From: Da Nasty North
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up this penisiss
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Old 05-31-04, 10:32 PM   #8
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From: colorado,Ft.Morgan
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lmao i think they aint hearin us dawg so once again yall need tp be uppin them votes aight holla bak~1~
 
Old 06-01-04, 12:55 AM   #9
Eli-22
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From: Da Sound
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yo i wuz feelin dis battle it wuz tight acc had sum nice ass punches but i think i got to give dis one 2 verbal violence jus becuz he came out hard as hell
 
Old 06-01-04, 12:27 PM   #10
King Solo
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this is a text battle, so its puzzling how you take me verbally
kid you heard of me, of course cuz i kill all, and your just and herb to me
6...kind of played second line!!
two dashes at ends of lines this lil kid, child stylins//
this kid is rated pg, only known for mild violence//
7...pretty funny playa!!
read this verse over and over just so your heads filled wit me
cuz you battled all noobs, now try to take someone wit credibility
6...pretty basic wordplay!!
get yo piece of da pie, cuz wit yo skills its easy to die
bring tears to your eyes with this shit alone is simply eaten you alive
6...aight punch, u need to step up ure punches!!
search deep kid and attempt to sum up your killer dissen
but your verse sounds to me nothin but a ken kannif intermission
7...pretty funny closer!!

im bout to tag my fame all over ya name//
ya lines was weak but whats to blaim//
4...weak man, too basic!!
ya knowin for ko.'s but thats about to change//
im gonna flip ya scripts make my verbs crucs ya body and break ya vertabrea//
3...second line stretched to fuck and the rhymin was off!!
i aint hugh heffner i dont playboy//
im gona play u like a childs toy//
4...fuckin weak, this ain't nursery rhyme time!!
cuz ur a hater plus a masterbatior flamed your ass see u later//
your luke sky walker and im darth vador//
4...consistently weak!!
sorry but i accidently cut your dick off with my light savor//
rappin gurls like u ill do for a favor//
maybe someday ull be a great as me but im still greater//
4...WEAK DAMN IT!!
rappin foos like you is bordum//
i think i won now its time for you to get off da forum//
3...weak closer!!


POINTS TOTALS
accomplishment - 32/50
verbal violence - 22/60

V/ - accomplishment
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Old 06-01-04, 02:44 PM   #11
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From: colorado,Ft.Morgan
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uppin for more votes please so just take ya time off and vote damn
 
Old 06-01-04, 08:45 PM   #12
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From: colorado,Ft.Morgan
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yo yall we need more votes if ya could pleaze
aight holla back~1~
 
Old 06-01-04, 08:57 PM   #13
AirForceFred
Flyweight
 
From: From Louisian, but stationed in Germany
IP: AC7E ABF0

Im going to give this to accomplishment, but to be totally honest you both were terrible.
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Old 06-01-04, 09:57 PM   #14
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From: Da Nasty North
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easy fred i would destroy you i came week on dis bitch cuz i saw his shit..
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Old 06-01-04, 10:11 PM   #15
Jacket
Flyweight
 
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yo i thought this was a decent battle...accomplishments flow and structure were definatly better, and yo closer was a nice hit and had the humor....oh, and dont worry about airforcefred, just check out my battle against him..actually, vote on it..
vote: accomplishment
 
 


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