Topic: Wut you do while in a battle in Iraq!!!

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alright iam checkin in and oh yea someone check out this battle so it can close plz.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127385

yo iam hitin the dirt of this corrupt battle//
shootin my bullets and givin the enemy a taggle//
storming the houses of these dam packies//
thinkin to myself that our enemy is lacky//
gettin pot shot 24/7//
but U hun them down givin them my number 7-7//
sittin in the heat and eating these dam MRE's//
but every day a close friend of mine is bleeding for his nation//
wishin I WAS home and livin the life of fear//
but I can not help but have a tear for the people//
taking the bodies and packin them up as poltery//
but the night of the raids the enemy got hell for their pay of the war lottery//
we hunt that bitch who was the terroist CIA//
but when we caught his ass he could'nt think of anything to say but wishin he was barring with the men//
so before u say we are not in the war for a reason//
all u are doing is teasin freedom//

checkity check check check

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im here in da dessert, tryin ta dodge bullets//
I've jst been put at gun point hopin that man won't pull it//
Then my hommie boy took his rifle n hit him in da back//
Den I did da same, shot him, den hid him in a sack//
Im in a war battle right now, n only army troops in my side//
You would be surprised if you seen us n dem pakies collide//
First I hear bullets passin by my head, only inches away//
These pussies always miss, these fuckin bitches are gay//
They jst can't aim, them lame packies r insane//
I'd might as well jst walk up to dem swingin my chain//
I bet if i was only 1 foot away, dem bitches would still miss//
Cuz forealz, who could kill a emcee dats full of illness//
Now I hear dat my pic is on every poster in every city//
Sayin they'll get an award if dey stick a bullet in me//
All because I've already killed more den one hundred people//
Now they say im like Bin Laden, except jst way more lethal//
But now forever that memory will be stuck in my mind//
Regret in my life now for how many ppl i killed at dat time//
Dis fucken George W. Bush sed we only fight for freedem//(freedom)
Why should i, wen we don't have it, fuck him we don't really need em//
And right now, shyt, why should I even believe him//
since im in a place where only blood and sand is wut i breathe in// (like breathe sand in your boddy)
Im tellin you, lvin in dis crazy war iz like livin in hell//
Except sometimes its hard to believe wuts real or not, u jst can't tell//

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sorry bout addin extra two lines..i messed up on my line count

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wow weak topical but atmos deffinly got this

KKKhater you better be commin hard agaist me in the league man

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ahhhhh I am tryin tho thats all I can say but yea we are uppin for the votes.

more votes ppl...well atleast some vote!!!!

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yo dis battle wuz tight atmo had a better flow and ryhme scheme but kkkhater took this one with overall better punches personals and humor

vote=kkk

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we are still upppppppppppppppppppppppppin for votes.

I thought atmo carried a better flo but..the punches where jus hit harder through KKK n not even harder, jus mo direct...

Vote: KKKhater..

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The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams.

Tupac Shakur

No longer living in fear, my pistol close in hand, Convinced this is my year...

Death is only as big as you make it, treat it as if its from Harlem n learn to Shake it...

- Lil Trip

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gotta give it to atmospher cause she a chick and i like the shit that was wrote

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