i think Seven thirds won this, his wordplay and creativity was really good, some alright punches and good flow

best line: Keep Callin me a Newb, It'll be Funnier when I win-This
-X-ing out this bitch Fast As New York Lottery Tickets

X your spit was good, although i think it kinda lacked flow

best line:he admits hes not ready for elevated Becuz ya record is 5-3, not betta then mines
I shouldnt battle noobs like you becuz ya still askin how do I set it up in front lines

Vote Overall: Seven Thirds

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Losses:1 to 40 Caliber Hitz
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iight 2-1 me... Uppin for votes.................................

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Uppin This for votes still.... Leave a link and I'll drop a vote in your battle.

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D/r'er they know I murked you and you know it.....Stop tryin to sway for votes..All I have to say.im still going to win watch

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I think X won cuz his closure really did finish the other dudes. so my vote is for X

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X-Came with everything including multies..and similies
Balance was stabled and evything...Punches lines did hit harder
which means he took this becuz of his personals and Metaphores
Structure wasnt too stratched. I also liked his closure

Seven-Came aight some aight verses but need more work
similies and metaphores need alot more work..Also the multies
only a few good lines..I will give ya the structure and balance but everything
needs work..keep elevatin

v/X hit harder return the fav in my battles please
X-Came with everything including multies..and similies
Balance was stabled and evything...Punches lines did hit harder
which means he took this becuz of his personals and Metaphores
Structure wasnt too stratched

Seven-Came aight some aight verses but need more work
similies and metaphores need alot more work..Also the multies
only a few good lines..I will give ya the structure and balance but everything
needs work..keep elevatin

v/X hit harder return the fav in my battles please


X-Came with everything including multies..and similies
Balance was stabled and evything...Punches lines did hit harder
which means he took this becuz of his personals and Metaphores
Structure wasnt too stratched

Seven-Came aight some aight verses but need more work
similies and metaphores need alot more work..Also the multies
only a few good lines..I will give ya the structure and balance but everything
needs work..keep elevatin

v/X hit harder return the fav in my battles please

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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I gotta be the dumbest. I meant to copy my link for my battle not my own shit lol. Yo return the fvors both of yall.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128390

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Uppin this for more votes...... 2-0..... Lets end it

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Aight 7 3rd keep them votes comin dawg lets show these bitches what we made of



LMFAO So why did you do it????

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To Be Honest...I Don't Know Why I Bothered

nice spit 7................murdered him.....UPIN 4 ma boy..................................

uppin 4 my boy X

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My boi won this shit uping some votes for my boi come on peeps.

Pro*

Uppin

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Well, Severn Thirds had a mediocre start, but the line about X ing out faster than NY lottery tickets was hilarious and wll placed. The rhyme structure was descent. Flow cool. Vocab okay.

X was cool, rhymes aiight. The start, like Seven Thirds was mediocre, but she hit with a lot of personals which was good.

v/Seven Thirds


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