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06-06-04, 09:02 PM | #1 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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**championship match** shadow's edge(champ) vs. accomplishment vs. casual
IP: 275E DC37
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battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern check in by wedsday verses due by thrusday votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse bar limits: 4 line min. 30 line max. total not for each person
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06-06-04, 09:05 PM | #2 | |||||
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IP: 919D 9DA1
blah. again. check, good luck, and lets keep it to 20 lines.
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06-06-04, 09:10 PM | #3 | |||||
"Ya'll Must've Forgot"
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IP: 2213 AC01
wow howd you manage to get champ check in anyways
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06-06-04, 10:17 PM | #4 | |||||
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IP: 919D 9DA1
^ good question. maybe it was KOing your ass a couple weeks back that did it? now a better question is why are you trying to beef with someone in your crew?
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06-06-04, 10:19 PM | #5 | |||||
"Ya'll Must've Forgot"
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IP: 2213 AC01
i have no response but to merk you when i drop... oh and dirtboy sorry bout the free post
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06-07-04, 12:33 AM | #6 | ||||||
Power Hungry
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IP: C7C6 E5C0
rootin for `tallic
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06-07-04, 08:49 AM | #7 | |||
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IP: B89A 3C2B
Chea.
Here. Fuck both of you.
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06-08-04, 12:10 PM | #8 | ||||
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IP: A357 5189
I click keys to hit knees an buckle fags when i belt these
Ya feel me? I got it locked.. with your skeletons.. an my key Try me.. this like the Holy Trinity of battles, an i`ll explain I ghost for Shadow an Son accomp.. so Father`s my real name All fun an games.. i hate to split these two apart for starters They`re shoppin` for talent.. an talent tops their list to barter I`m creatin` Martyrs.. cos these two bitches die for their beliefs Believed they could equal me.. now two on one still has them beneath Fucka three-some.. good grief.. i`ll let the hoes scrap for seconds Exhausted in a minute.. chances are grave cos thas what beckons A chance? You reckon? Well i take both chances an fuckin` wreck `em Shadow saw the match-up.. an invited accomp to collab with him Gettin` this far`s an accomplishment on it`s own.. but now ya finished Got within` reach of the title.. but thas all you accomplished Kid`s dished.. Quote:
Yeah right.. You`ll probably use the same excuse explainin` the b/s verse ya write Turn back to son the darkness.. S.E`s a bitch cos he`ll always Miss Nothin` but limp wrists.. punchin? You couldn`t even make a fist You`d think this is the lunch line the way you gettin` served punch lines Two days to burn me.. don`t bother.. cos you could never match mine.
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06-09-04, 10:04 AM | #9 | |||||
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IP: 919D 9DA1
I elevate… y’all just hate… bitches.
Not just easy, this wins satisfying, through n through I mean the only downside to this battle is… well, you two I’m the clear winner, these bitches quiver, I never fail to deliver I’ll be laughing all the way to the bank… n drop two in the river Everyone’s sick of accomp, drunk running his mouth They all leavin…shit, even ya records heading south So winning this battle’s no acco… well actually never mind I think I’ll let you drop the played accomplishment lines DV made me text leader, n you soar… that’s just how life goes … but battleing Dirtboy!? Clear shows, a’s just hit new lows. And illtalic’s in denial, I thought you was good all this while But shit… Couldn’t even get a vote when I merked you with your own style Kid’s a history geek, its clear… where he go, bitches is never near Honestly Abe, your sex life is just “Four score n seven years” You bitches worth my best 1-2? Nah, you know the truth… Is slash that, I bring ½ and still fucking beat you I bring truth to pen is mightier than the sword … when each of my keys is really hitting your spinal chord Ghostwrite lines in your blood n leave your ass for dead Kid don’t dread… at least now your verses actually well red
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06-09-04, 06:59 PM | #10 | |||||
"Ya'll Must've Forgot"
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IP: 7C40 358D
Shit fuck dis rankin system accom got in this battle the cheap way
you could've one this battle but you overpaid for them shit ass verses on ebay and s.e. your punches suck they flunk when the shits cruchtime what i'm wonderin hows there a shadows edge when there aint no sunshine casual takes beatin daily why that why its fortunate that his s.n. reflects shit was ittalic till i knocked his verse off dis site and slanted from da right to da left you see a good future cuz both you fuckers starin through a refracted lense cuz s.e. diss my record when your total battles couldn't touch my wins -casual friday- is tommrow so right now verses due so it is your time to die when i own this whole week and merk bitches in days that end in -Y- theese fags couldn't punch they way outa wet paper bag so how they takin action -i love- to kick the shit out theese bitches so call dis verse a -fatal attraction- and according to most beef wit me aint somthin you beggin for or somthin you want so s.e. say he aint on dicks.. shit bitch you stole natives structre and font -bang bang your dead-kid have fun playin wit cork guns and gats wit plastic caps when theese two bitches could pull out pairs of a.k.s and not shoot a game of craps reverse words and put theese bitches to sleep whent hey meet my wesson and smith shit your keys droppin quickly like i found dat bitch alicia and kicked her offa cliff you bitches act like dem checks yo ass can't cash and get out and just bonce and i'm da last in this line but you gotta be on my level to even have your verse count
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06-09-04, 07:30 PM | #11 | ||||
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: 0352 9EFC
Alright.....first to vote....
Accomp.....I don't know what happened to you man. Your verse was way too stretched and your punches were kinda played/weak. So obviously, you didn't get my vote...... Now Casual and Shadow came pretty hard against each other. I didn't like Casual's opener. It was basically just meaningless multis. You can't have a filler for an opener. I like how Shadow's opener was a diss to the both of them, it set the tone for the rest of the battle. Casuals punches didn't seem to hit that hard and I didn't like the way he used the quote. Quotes are fine, yours just seemed pointless. Shadow had a couple really good punches and a lot less filler than Casual. Both flowed well, but I think that Shadow took this one....... Good job to all!!! Vote - Shadows Edge
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06-10-04, 03:24 AM | #12 | ||||||
Power Hungry
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IP: 9C03 EBA9
loool
Accomp didnt have a chance oh hell in this battle. lol It was just between Illtalic and Shadow's edge. and I personally think Shadow got this. he came more witty. and thats the only reason he won. good battle shadow's edge and illtalic. and that other guy, that was here...
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06-10-04, 06:40 AM | #13 | |||||
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IP: 919D 9DA1
yep... nice battle.
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06-10-04, 08:30 AM | #14 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: 275E DC37
breakdown for casual:
flow:good job probably the best out of the three here 7.5/10 volcab:alright use better then the average of the league 7/10 punches:alot of lines i'll give that nothing overly strong or new though 6/10 overall:20.5/30 breakdown for shadow edge: flow:no problems here shows why you guys are on top of the league 7/10 volcabretty basic stuff i've seen better from you here before 6/10 punches:some alright lines agaisnt casual but the ones against accomplishment are the same it seems everyone uses nothing new or orginal there my fav line,"Ghostwrite lines in your blood n leave your ass for deadKid don’t dread… at least now your verses actually well red" good closer i thought 6.5/10 overall:19.5/30 breakdown for accomplishment: flow:the bars were streched real bad without any kind of internal structure to help it out not good 5/10 volcabretty basic array not really showing that you should be here 5/10 punches:mainly played ideas but you had quite a few of them so you get points for that 5.5/10 overall:15.5/30 expected more from you here vote--overall pretty good battle i thought casual got it though
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06-10-04, 10:38 PM | #15 | |||||
"Ya'll Must've Forgot"
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IP: 7C40 358D
my vote = casual if i can vote cuz my verse was awful i typed it in six minutes swear ....
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