Feed Back Please

I'm Sick Cause I Got Dat "Lyrical Fever"
I'm Exposin Yall To This "Satirical Cleaver"
I'm Like Gucci To U To Expensive To Buy
I'm The Fuckin Truth And U Just A Lie
Me And Rap Go Back Like A "Rockin Chair"
I'm Like Asthma Cause I'm "Blockin Air"
Like Air Freshener Gettin Rid Of Your Stench
If We Was In Jail You'd Be My Bitch
I Gotta Watch But I Ain't Got Time For U
Go Get Your Mans I'll Crush That Bitch Too..........Peace

This Was Quick Like A Few Minutes

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L-A-T

Take A Bath Wit Da Catholics In Holy Water No Wonder Dey Tryna Hold Me Under Longer
-Eminem "Renegade"

Dat Gurl Wit Da Vicious Flows And Tight Thighs
Niggas Wanna Sign Her And Make Her Dey Wife
-Love And Tears LAT

it was pretty good for a rookie keep elevatin kid.....good luck iight...................................

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