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06-14-04, 01:41 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 5867 FD83
femcee's vote: No...Your Whole Structure Was Off, You Had No Guidelines And Not One Punch, You Need To Work On A Few Things Before You Tryout For Any Crew...
-Your Structure... -Your Punches... -Your Creativity... One Of Your Lines Revised By Me: -------------------------------- OG Line:Yo i'm just sittin blind spittin when i'm rhymin, Sounds pre-written cos i got da perfect timin, 1st-People Know That When You Spit Its Supose 2 Rhyme, Thats A Given... 2nd-A Prewritten Is Usually Discovered When Its A Long Verse Dropped Early, Not At The Perfect Time... My Version: Ive Got More Than Textual Basics When I Transform Your LiPs 2 A LiSp... ...Cuz Your Vrs. Was Like Anal Spit Similiar 2 Shit, But Im Quick To A Fix So Elevate........... Vote: I Think You Need 2 Stay Hidden In The Shadows For A While (NO) |
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06-14-04, 03:52 PM
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I'm So Punny
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IP: 95FF 1D86
^^^truth...
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06-15-04, 06:55 AM
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IP: 0F6A C933
Fair enough
But before you start knockin my shit read dis one: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128866
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06-25-04, 02:48 PM
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Thank You, Come Again
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IP: 8E9C FD88
yo check me out. You can see my battle gainmst double cross T.K.O or mine against nervez . The double cross one i came strong as hell and beat the shit outta him
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