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Old 06-17-04, 08:27 PM   #1
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Yall muthafuckas could hate me now, I hear the bullets crying out,they trying to take me out,off the radar, gotta stay hard against my rivals, this is war, play your part, as Im snatching the title, you can rattle the tower and watch it fall, celebrate and applause, but they be replaced twice as strong, have you dazed in an awe,this is mischeif locked in a beat so dissmiss the police, and just knock in da streets.Im a mobster with heat Pimpin, and i aint finished till u bitches burnt by da friction im a menace doin dirt in every city district.Grimy, a lost soul runnin around blindly,finally the oppurtunity to shine like a diamond,grindin, game in yo skull, these lyrics i flow put a strut in yo stroll,sprinkle flavor on yo soul.danger is on its own lurkin, anger on its own workin,so picture perfect,beware of da gold serphant. You got a promblem we can stunt, I be smobbin with a blunt off dis drama i erupt, spitten lava when i nut.Actions speak louder than words let me out dis casket, help me out of dis hearst, blow out my brains cause i figure that will be worst, than to live my life like a coward and think in reverse GET ON YOUR KNEES AND SMILE LIKE A DONUT BITCH!!!!
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Old 06-17-04, 10:17 PM   #2
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u need 2 shorten ur lines & sticc 2 a specific topic when u flow cuz ur all ova da place wit ur shit u need 2 improve on it den spit again
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