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06-18-04, 05:37 PM
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Valley Of Death (feedback wanted plz)
IP: 5043 32F4
[Intro] *Cough Cough* tired of all these bullshit deaths... tired of all our neverending pain & struggle... tired of walking through this valley of death... and tired of all the punks taking they last breath... walking through my city looking at the rotting bones in grief with observation in a dark alley I see the shadow of death in front of the devil killing for a demonstration never-ending murders taking innocent lives for their sick fuckin' pleasures make's me wanna vomit, stomach churning out of my true displeasures see through the windows in the dark no one's there just a reflection of me feel someone watching my every move, look around and there's nothing I see I walk into a empty room I hear voices whispering secrets from the walls pictures unfolding from the wall am I going back to the past I ask standing tall? all of a sudden I hear a familiar voice sayin' " Welcome To The Valley Of Death" I be running away constantly out of fear, cuz darkness surrounds me I'm seethe I look up at the sky and ask God "are you trying to teach me me something lord? booming voice sayin' "this is your life in 20 years you see what you can afford? "this is the consequences of your thug life here comes the apocalypse" "you better change your ways I'll surely be back at the very next eclipse" He blacks out wakes up an realizes it was only a dream or than again was it? He walks outside darkness converted back to light someone took Death with it He let out a sigh of relief but He has a cold feeling on his back about to turn but after a second it went away, He said "Ha fuck it no lessons to damn learn" *So He walks back to the house little does he know gods watching him* *But Lucifer also, what way will he turn? both L & G really want him*
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06-18-04, 06:41 PM
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IP: 5043 32F4
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06-18-04, 06:52 PM
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Tha 1st member of S.W.A
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IP: B525 44D9
not bad, there wuz like twice that u rymed tha same werd with itself, but it wuz aight. check my open mic, "R.o.d. (Kool Col-b Style)" werd
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 REST IN PEACE MY MUTHAPHUKKIN SPICCA OMB!!!
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06-18-04, 06:52 PM
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New to RB
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IP: 8C03 099F
.......extend your vocabulary a bit, too many words used over and over and over
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