u spit first, check in

Im checking in
10 lines and up. good luck yo.
plus, as far as Im concere Ur gender is a guy so wateva.

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I got this nigga ducking bullets like lighting and thunder/
He still aint hot, even after using Jordens old number/
Battlings a sick bizness, and I hope U packed Ur medicine/
cuz U a newbee, I know, but Im go to war wit U like a veterine/
diss Ur home town just befor I do a show in it/
U'll probably have more chances, if U just dont show to this/
U might just have a chance if U post, as long as no one notice it/
and Im willing to spit lines like stail gum wit no taste/
take Ur rymes to the ER, cuz my punchlines left Ur metaphores in a neck brace/
It'll have U breathing and speaking out Out a hole in Ur asophigus/
after this battle, Ur mom'll probably mail me the bill for Ur sarcofigus/
Im a nasty New York nigga, like Rikim/
U just a nasty nigga period, who probably likes him/
plus U a pussy, so I whatch U bleed on my mattress/
dont only struggle Uv ever know, is trying to open tampax packages/

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this is how my finisher is actually supose to be, sorry.

plus U a pussy, so I whatch U bleed on my mattressess/
the only struggle Uv ever known, is trying to open tampax packages/

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MA FLOW IS LIKE THE PACIFIC OCEAN//
UR ABOUT TO GET SOME PUSSY........ WAIT HERES THE LOTION//
UR STYLE IS GENERIC SO ITS NOT LIKE MINES//
KEEP SPITTEN DEM WEAK WORDS, AND UR A BUSTA WITHOUT THE RHYMES//
UR COLOR BLIND SO I HAVE TO WRITE IN MARKERS//
WHITE OR BLAC DONT MATTER 2 U, U WOULDNT NO IF U LOOKED LIKE STEVEY FROM THE PARKERS//
I'LL KILL ON A TRACK OR IN TEXT//
UR DISSEY FROM THE FLOW,I'LL LET U SAY DA REST. 1

i vote for Eyedenty cuz what the fuck was mjust talkin' about stealin' shit from 8mile and shit, ayo that is what eminem said when he was rappin' in the parkin' lot wit his crew and shit. Eyedenty won no question.

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young smirf dont even like me and U got this kat voting for me. Ur wak ass verse is makeing me some friends. ha ha ha ha, just fucking wit U. this aint over yet. but U kinda did bite now that I remmember ems wak ass freestyle from the movie. but w/e. its all up the voters.

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yo eyedenty gets my vote cuase mjust and that 8 mile shit was terrible
and what the fuck happend to our battle mjust sitll waiting

hold on, im gonna give my mom a rap name so she can register into rap battles. she has never seen 8mile in her life, U'll be safe wit this one.
Bottom line is, dont Use shit that every freestyle rapper has seen atleast 3 times in his/her life.
be original.

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Id really like to get this ass whooping over wit, he's learned his leason enough so could we uppin them votes.

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Vote goes to Eyedentity, better structure and punches, Mjust u need to elevate and get a bit more creative, No beef niggaz return da fav plz

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