hey im new to this... but here is a verse a wrote.. i didnt take to long to write it soo tell me what u think


Oo shit you know what its like when u find ur girl cheating*
what did i do to make this wrong, this bitch im not mistreating*
This chick is coming home late… doesn’t have good explanations*
maybe its cause the sex is bad… not good enuff for her expectations*
Im trying to work this out.. But she aint down for negotiations*
This bitch is trying to get all up on me but I dunno who im kissing*
find she’s cheating see her on the milk carton that bitch is missing*
She thinks she can play these tricks on me but im not a fool*
The bitch is cheating.. sleeping with my best friend.. that’s cruel*
im gonna end this saying I dropped that bitch.. like she dropped her pants*
Soo I wanna tell her this relationship is over just to let u know in advance*

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My Lines Are ILL yo

Short but powerful piece,you could work on the emotion a bit but it was pretty nice. Vocab was basic but to the point. Flow was good.

find she’s cheating see her on the milk carton that bitch is missing

Really liked this line

im gonna end this saying I dropped that bitch.. like she dropped her pants

Probably my favo line

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