ok lets get in popping you gonna get dropped and no one gonna help you

10-20 lines
no dickriding
no feeding
no crew (not that you got one)
no bitten
no hate
no prewritten

due tonight by 12

holla you spit first. 1

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fo sho it goes down just be getttttin yo rymes ready

damn hate break yo feelins like this you call self aka but you really sound like white bitch dont take this to the head like u did wit those dicks keep talkin down and youll find yofake ass self lying in a ditch my lyrics r to cold hate to say but everything you say is gettin kinda old straight out of five deuce hoover after u get threw pickin yo jaw off the floor just remember one thing you the rookie and im the freestyle pro

ok yo check it
the only thing you can serve me is you head on a silver tray cause you a servnate and a dead men if you battling me//
i'll take you back to preschool where you learn not to fuck with me and how to count to three//
cause by the count for three you'll be robbed, stabbed, and dead//
you spit a paragraph but i ain't got a clue what you just said//
see i'ma teach you why i'm banned for being too good//
cause i got a rap style that'll make your granny move back in the hood//
how in the fuck am i a rookie when i got 18 battles more than you//
i'll show you that my words bring pain to rappers like a tatoo//
see you punches missed like when you swing at a ball that cuvred//
i done battling this punk and the crowd yelling at him "YOU JUST GOT SERVED"//

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damn hate break yo feelins like this you call self aka but you really sound like white bitch dont take this to the head like u did wit those dicks keep talkin down and youll
find yofake ass self lying in a ditch my lyrics r to cold hate to say but everything you say is gettin kinda old straight out of five deuce hoover after u get threw pickin yo jaw off the floor just remember one thing you the rookie and im the freestyle pro
THIS IS ONE OF DA WEAKEST VERSUS IVE SEEN IN HERE >>>>WOW
A.K.A> fukin murdered him .servin them up u threw stuff softer than luvtaps.wuwt?
Vote goes to AKA other dude was no cometition...better punches personalls and it was a good rythm this aint a d/r vote or hate im just amazed..............wow

O My for real AKA blew that shit out the motherfuckn water , Yo i didnt understand anything servin said all his words were jumbled and shit , i dont know .....I like AkA punch lines and how he just merked the fuck out servin, work on ur shit ....u messn with da GOD

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PUSH ME PUSSIED I NEED A GOOD REASON TO GIVE THIS TRIGGER A GOOD SQUEEZ

servin them up- not a very good verse. you need to set it up a bit first
not bad rhyming tho...

A.K.A.- nice verse... well structured... nice flow... good punches
nice opener nd closer... that's it

vote- A.K.A.

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wtf aka takes this easily he had better punches personals everything

i aint gon vote until u drop a vote in this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...d.php?p=1369886

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State CapiTol don't say i win and then don't press your vote. hit this up again

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i will later...i jus wan get votes in my battle and niggaz gon sleep so hit my battle up n ill vote for dis

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ayo state capital you think it later yet ?

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RETURN THE FAVOR. HERE'S THE LINK.

Me vs. Unfortunate

Sevin Them Up - You got a long way to go. Your structure is horrble. I guess ya rhymin was aight. Not really any good punches. Elevate. 3/10

A.K.A. - You had a couple of iight punches. Structure needs work and tha "YOU GOT SERVED" line was cheesy. LOL. But you did hella better than servin. 5.5/10

Vote - A.K.A

CAN'T BELIEVE HOW BAD THIS BATTLE WAS,
SERVIN IT UP:TERRIBLE,BUT AT LEAST YOU RYMED,YOU NEED LOTS OF WORK..
A.K.A:YOU HAD BADLY STRETCHED LINES IN YOUR OPENER,OK PUNCHES,BUT YOU WERENT UP AGAINST ANY COMPETITION...NO HATE JUS MY OPINION...

VOTE/A.K.A

HIT 1 OF THESE UP N I'LL ADD DA VOTE:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130025
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134245