good personals from him? name one, do u newbs even know what a personal is? and u even put "aiight poll vote my shit now mayn...................." can u make dick riding anymore obvious, thats some bowl shit right there.

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Opener: tie
Structure: tie
Flow: Tie
Personals
Olking
Punches: picture
Closer: Picture
Vot: Picture

Yours was betta please return the favor in http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132007

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olkingcole:

Why is it motherfuckers want me to go first?
Cuz they know if they do I'll slaughter their verse.
^^in the first post you should you'll go first so fake personal good punch 5/10
I jot down a curse when I do these battles.
My rhymes are unbridled like a horse w/ no saddle.
^^seen alot of lines similar to this 5/10
If you think you can hang then think again
You're about to cry Rivers like its Pinkerton.
^^decent punch and meta 7/10
If this ends w/ me on top like it should,
Then it proves your under par like Tiger Woods
^^mostly filler 4/10
Now make your next verse and don't make it tardy,
Or I'll eat your ass up like the Donner party.
^^played line...eat ya ass up...donner...still good tho 5/10

overall : 26/50

pictureperfect2:

u first to drop first to get dropped bitches go first, heard me right?
and whats a softer bitch then someone named after a nursery rhyme
^^hottest bar in the battle strong personal nice diss 9/10
“Old King *C*ole was a merry old soul,
And a merry old soul was he;”
Till he noticed he would never have his vote poll full
Cuz u can’t know rap I if u don’t even know your own spelling
^^decnt didnt like the structure or rhyme scheme tho 5/10
Olkingkole told me “I only got into this to get lil boys to love me,”
“That’s the deal wit the nursery name, I want all up in their huggies”
^^lmao@ all up in their huggies funny shyt nice bar 7/10
but now u left wit people hatin your spits and feelin my diss
cuz you and voters go together like love between bill o’reilly and ludacris
^^lol good meta and strong closer nice verse 7/10

overall : 28/40

vote: picture perfect2

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i think pictureperfect took this battle with his opener and closer...olkingkole elevate stop being so basic make your rhymes more complex and harder punches ya verse was decent but not good enough to win

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picture took it...this battle was REALLY weak....his didnt rhyme but he hit harder...


http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125456

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