yeah i gotta do this over cause killa spelled my name wrong ima copy and paste his verse

aight yall this was killa's verse that he did but i had to redo it cause he spelled my name wrong
Yo Night Vision its a Fight decision but ya dumb
Try to look in the future kid now ya 5-1
You think u spell sick smell sick but chould i care-less
To win this battle cry to god to get Blessed
The vision i see is ur little bitch ass losein Duke
Leave ya on tha floor like its a madden Juke

aight yall and this was my verse

introduce this wannabe faggot fuckin face to tha curb~
roll him up and smoke this cat cause he's a tru herb~
fuckin mushy faggot your rhymes i'll just str8 consume~
this guy couldnt get pussy if he lived in a woom~
given this cat internal plus external fuckin wounds~
the only time he passin hot shit is when he gets gas from prunes~

NightVision- you had a good verse with a nice flow
good rhyming thoughout...overall good little verse
with punches

Killah-that was ok but you need to come harder
some good rhyming tho...

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yo ill vote on this if u drop an honest vote in this battle...cuz killah aint an official member yet he's on trial...http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131994

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Openor: Night
Structure: Killah
Flow: tie
Punches: Night
personals: Night
Vote: Night

Please return the favvor the link of the battle is in my sig

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uppin for some mutha fuckin votes ..................................

ill vote on this shit but u gotta drop a vote on one of mine

they in tha sig

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killah, you had sum decent lines,
You think u spell sick smell sick but chould i care-less
To win this battle cry to god to get Blessed
i didnt get that one tho, n it didnt have enuf syllables on the second line.

nightvision, the woom line was hot, opener was alrite, the finish was OK but could of been better.

ima give this vote to nightvision

ill poll when on a yall puts a fair vote on mine.

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try again then fuck it...

-killah- this was ok for an opener 5/10


-night vision- this was a better opener... good w/p and r/s 7/10


-killah- ok rhyming... nothing else... no punch 3/10


-night vision- nice flow w/p punch 7/10


-killah- ok rhyming... ok closer 5/10


-night vision- good r/s... good w/p... funny closer 7/10


overall- nightvision had a better flow more consistent rhyme scheme
and came with harder punches...what more can i say

no hate but it wasn't really worth breaking down such a small verse
if you go to the rules it says all battles have to be 10 lines or more first

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