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Old 06-28-04, 01:06 PM   #16
The Black Plague
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Uppin, please vote, drop a link and i will return the favor
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Old 06-28-04, 01:22 PM   #17
Orijinal
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Aight, here this is how I break it down.

Integer, you need to work on your rhyming sense and become more complex in lyrics because 3/4 of the shit you wrote was gobbage. "And I know how fast you can say that, just try/Cum shot right in your sister's eye." C'mon now, that was so simplistic.

Black Pague, you also need to work on your complexity, you need to elevate more.

Opener: Plague
Multies: Didn't see any
Punches: Plague
Personals: Plauge
Structure: Integer
Ender: Plague
VOTE: Plague

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Old 06-28-04, 01:52 PM   #18
KillaCamFlow
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I think Black won this battle hands down...i really did not gety the other person rhyme.....1...2...3..wat good wit that but ya...Black had some good struc not alot of wordplay ort multies....nothing came from...the other person...weak battle..but black did some ok work........vote on my battle wqit metah iight///ill poll my vote when my battle get voted on

Vote....Black
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Old 06-29-04, 01:47 PM   #19
The Black Plague
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One last vote needed....

Uppin
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Old 06-30-04, 04:26 PM   #20
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This was a really simple

Plague-you had pretty simple rhyme sceem going on and your ish was okay but i seen better from you......your punches was okay so keep it up

integer-your shit was good only thing you had was your flow you need to elevate man

but keep it up

v/Plague
 
Old 07-02-04, 01:43 AM   #21
Willa
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both work on vocab
flow int
structure both need work
puunches plauge
overall plauge both need elevation though
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