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Old 07-01-04, 11:24 PM   #1
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Drink wine and smoke, read minds of folk like propaganda

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Drink wine and smoke, read minds of folk like propaganda
Hints slyly sent highly rated messages like a hot commander
View crews like spectators; South Central scrimmages are just
Mental images like a kid seeing his dead mother, a lot
Of misled brothers do crime, and the media don’t smother the plot
Deep affection peek in the direction of me being ill
And seeing skills that builds verses, got cats fleeing hills
Word is law like bird I’m raw in flight spread wings
Wearing red bling and tonight have a dame on bedsprings
Attack static by being acrobatic stem fantastic like gymnastics
Never slumber in walk, do somersaults like Nadia Comineach drastic
Convince the hood stands like dense woods trees with no leaves
Fruit that pollute streets even make brutes seem weak and squeezed
Minds sway and find a way through crowds and blue clouds
Like rains from hurricanes
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Old 07-02-04, 02:11 AM   #2
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it was aight
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Old 07-02-04, 02:24 AM   #3
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Corny as fuck nig...
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Old 07-02-04, 03:05 AM   #4
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Dawg, no offense...you need to work on a lot dawg. Keep at it tho...don't get discouraged. Rappin' takes practice. Like anixety said...corny as fuck.
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Old 07-02-04, 03:10 AM   #5
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yea man just elevate until then this = lol
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Old 07-02-04, 05:26 AM   #6
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hey yall can't tell me why it's corny stuff is multi and it's got vocab damn I want yall to show me you can do better other wise its all talk
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Old 07-02-04, 05:09 PM   #7
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it not that Corney and its a good flow
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Old 07-03-04, 12:26 AM   #8
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Biggie_XL thanks for being real on this one
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Old 07-03-04, 12:41 AM   #9
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you really need to elevate alot thats pretty much all i gotta say

can you feed back on my open mic only live once thank you
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