no no no sicwitit wat is this no rhymes man come on rhyme the first two lets get on this but nice multiple rhymes in the first line i liked that.u lacked good punches and personals man u got the potential i voted on 2 of ur battles and for some reason u jus dont link wit good punches but u can cause ur rhyming ability is good.aight nightvison great personal to open wit i liked it a lot.nice flow it was consistant. so for better personals and punches my vote goes to vision

v/nv

NV's Drop:

like i bad infection your rhymes u gotta get rid of it~
i'll spit my rhymes to your face and let u get siccwitit~
nice using his name against him with a good punch=perfection 7.5/10
get inside you tear out your fuckin liver and bladder~
then your heart and give em to ya on a silver platter~
weak thing but still good tho 6.5/10
spit this shit so hard he wont come back he will collapse~
jump his heart back up he see i'm still their and he start's to elapse~
pretty nice punch I was feelin' it 7/10
i bet he think's he's immortal think's he is fuckin painless~
this is comen from a faggot who's favorite planet is uranius~
not liking the whole gay thing but it was a good punch anywayz 7.5/10
this guy rep's tha hood like that makes him a fuckin man~
the only hood he ever rept was one from tha klu klux clan
nice is he white????? 6.5/10

overall: 7/10

siccwitit drop:

Im gonna slap the shit out ya Face,Im loud like the base,And i always win the race//
Specially when faggets like u is spittn,i can luggie better shit then uve written//
what's this rhyming 3 words in one line and 2 words in the 2nd line & not rhyming the ending 1st bar & 2nd bar is fuckin' stupid kid 4/10
I like how u have to explain ur raps to the crowd//
Why dont u just scream LOOK HOW GAY I AM real LOUD//
as I said in night's drop i'm not feelin' gay jokes cuz they played unless its a good punch and in this one it isn't good 0/10
"Hey guys did u get my jokes, haha , thier funny" sound familiar?//
Im gonna make this guy a fuckn lost memorie like the easte bunnie//
what the fuck is this??? 3/10
U been to the hood?The dirty Part of WalMart dont count dogg sorry//
Ur raps Ur style and ur fuck name is played out like ATARI//
not weak shit again 5/10
Bitch ive been Imortal , homie where u been?//
Just like MOTAL kombat im bout TO...FINSH HIM!!!......BITCH//
shouldn't of added the bitch cuz that makes you sound weird here 3/10

overall: 3/10

vote NV

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siccwitit won dis hands down, dis wuz da only ap i laughed my ass off on, the structure was off but who cares? vote-siccwitit

uppin for some votes on this and no herb dr votes for sikwitit

uppin for some votes on this and no herb dr votes for sikwitit

aight this shit is been open for 6 week's uppin for votes leave a link i'll hit it up and shytown that was a pure dr u fuckin homo

aight uppin this shit has been open for like 6 week's now and no dr votes like tha newbs sikwitit got to vote for him leave a link i'll hit it up

kk


sic:gotta say, it had niec flow, but man your punches really lacked bruh.. you just need to elevate on that tip.. cause if you had punches withthat flow then you would have beat him.. but you didnt hehe.. just try and get more creative punches and shit.. then you should be strait on the battle tip...


night:you had nice punches,, flow was a lil bit worse than sic, but it was still decent.. had some nice personals and shit.. good job.. good battle verse

v/night

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134057
^ hit that up

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Proud OYD member again . <------- That is whassup

night:i liked your flow beter than,sicc's but your punches were really played,that took away from your verse alot..
sicc,did'nt like your flow but thought your punches were good,punches won you this battle,sorry night but your shit waz jus 2 played..
vote/sicc
return the favour:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130025 skforty7
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134245 gunit
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134328 stank

no dr votes^^^ uppin for sum votes this was like 1 of tha first battles i had it should be closed

no dr votes uppin for sum votes this was like 1 of tha first battles i had it should be closed

amma hand to night.
boy jus came a lot harder and had a couple good personals/ let me break it down.

flow night

structure night

punches night

personals no one


vocab night

night not the best battle of yours ive read but you still had enough
vote.. night