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LaTiNKiTTeN 5 100.00%
Apotheosis 0 0%
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Old 07-02-04, 04:26 PM   #16
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listen faggot...how bout u ACTUALLY DROP TO APOTHEOSIS????? INSTEAD OF DUCKIN? AND,THE ESL LINE...IS TO THE AFRICAN SPONSORED CHILD....JUST CUZ HE'S IN ENGLAND DOESNT MEAN HE DOESNT NEED ENGLISH AS A SECOND LANGUAGE CLASSES...LAST TIME I CHECKED..THEY SPOKE ENGLISH IN ENGLAND MORON....HIS FIRST LANGUAGE WOULD BE AFRICAN DUMB ASS....N MY LAST LINE? I POSTED THE CORRECTION RIGHT BELOW IDIOT...BUT THERE IS NO EDIT BUTTON.............HAHAHAAHAH ROLF@UR STUPID ASS N THE FACT THAT U ARE SHOOK OF APOTHEOSIS.......................N THAT U'D NEVER BATTLE ME CUZ U'RE SCARED ROFL.....NOW GET THE FUCK OUTTA MY BATTLE THREAD FAGGOT...OR SHOULD I SAY...MURDA MISTRESS
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Old 07-02-04, 04:31 PM   #17
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actually,if u knew anything about rap...u'd know that u CAN rhyme the same word,especially when the word has different meanings ,or used in a different context...a LOT of rappers do it,especially in audio....it makes it sound a lot better...but u wouldnt know anything about good raps...cuz u suck....n the reason i'm dissin murderous mask,is cuz their ip's matched...n no dumbass....not everyone who uses aol has the same ip u fuckin retard............................n u're blacklisted for a reason.....yea i did expose u for posin as a femcee
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Old 07-02-04, 05:19 PM   #18
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No they dont... And if they do... They rhyme the word before it also...
 
Old 07-04-04, 03:40 PM   #19
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yea i'm sure 14 yr olds know alllllllll there is to know about rap,...get the fuck outta here KUNIVA
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Old 07-04-04, 08:41 PM   #20
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^lol why is tobis nose white in ur picture......upin.......
 
Old 07-04-04, 11:58 PM   #21
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ok, this was a hot ass battle right here.

Apotho, damn, you came real hard, man. You had some tight punches, that hit pretty hard. But most weren't all that hard hittin'. The flow was pretty good too. It went off in a few places, but overall it was tight. You had nice opener and closer, and that line about how she will hit the ground is pretty tight. Overall, you had a tight verse. good drop

LK, this was a really hot verse. You had a lot of tight punches. A lot of them hit really hard. Yo flow was also very good. Didn't really go off in many places. Yuo had some nice lines, liek that shave the hair off yo chest line. Overall, hot verse.

I think LK got this one, slightly.

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Old 07-05-04, 03:01 PM   #22
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YES IM VOTING FOR MYSELF

you stupid bitch!

Yes...... Apothesis

I think he came good the opener was nice

Use ya fake personals, that picture was a fuckin joke hoe,
And ill destroy another personal…..am I resolve?..…………NO!

Good personals


Poor PErsonals

aight...r u an old white dude,or u a sponsored child?/
its either multiple personalities...or a SPONSOR..and a CHILD//
now i got it...WHITE DUDE'S THE SPONSER...yall aint the same/
thats why last night u picked up the SPONSORED CHILD the PLANE//


Anyway Latinkttein came hard but she had to much fake personals in her verses and she had ALOT of filliers and RECYCLED OR BITING LINES I HEARD that SHAVE your chest LINE B4 and she try to be creative but alot of her lines were played apoth came better cos he flowed well and the pedro line was funny lol at a wack ass name like pedro anyway he came harder in punches and i prefair his opener to latins


OH NO IM GONNA BE BANNED FOR VOTIGN FOR MYSELF!
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Old 07-06-04, 08:39 AM   #23
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dam my voters are blacklisted............upinn............upinn
 
Old 07-07-04, 01:24 AM   #24
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vocab tie both could use work
flow um i think lks was better because of a's structure the flow was off a lil
structure lk although both could use a lil work
personals lk without dobt she came mad hard with it both were pretty good though
a urs were soo played its not even funny lol
good verse from both but im givin it 2 lk for better personals she kilt u with em dawg
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Old 07-07-04, 01:53 PM   #25
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c'mon now...MURDEROUS MASK IS TRYNA VOTE...OF COURSE HE'S BLACKLISTED...HE'S IN THE DAMN VERSE.........N KRYOGENIX????????? LOOK AT MY SIG.................................THEY PROLLY BEEN BLACKLISTED SINCE I BEEN ON THIS BOARD.........THEY'RE OBVIOUS HATE VOTES.......WHY WOULD MASK LIKE PUNCHES I'M DISSIN HIM WITH...OF COURSE HE WOULDNT........................
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Old 07-07-04, 07:17 PM   #26
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HOLY FUCK........this was the longset fuckin battle a nigga ever read................................alright breakdown for these novels

Latin: you had good wordplay 7/10
your punches were hittin pretty hard 7/10
your personals were fire...kilt him with these 9/10
your consistancy....every bar i felt.. 9/10
your structure was good i was feelin it 7/10
your flow was good i could flow to that ish 8/10
meta's i didnt see too many just alot of personals 6/10
multi's shit was pretty good i saw a couple and ones i saw were fire 7/10
vocab..vocab was pretty good 7/10
creativitie: good research good Intro 9/10

Conclusion: you had real good shit ma i dont know how you put up with writing all that shit..got damn....i dont like the / after each line thought but still hot.....good personals they were hittin hard..and LOL at his pic

overall: 73/100

Apothesis:
wordplay: your wordplay is alwayz good i was feelin it 8/10
punches: punches were hittin hard just not as hard as hers 6/10
personals: same with the punches ^ 6/10
consistancy: you stayed consistant throughout this battle 7/10
structure: that shits ugly LOL change that structure 6/10
flow: flow'd on point good flow 8/10
meta's: some meta's were good sum fillers 6/10
multi's: your multi's was good i saw a few 7/10
vocab: vocab was good too real good vocab 9/10
creativitie: creativitie..good jus not as good as lk 8/10

conclusion: your shit hit REAL HARD like FIE,...but latin jus hit you right in the Chest with them personals and the structure on your shit was ugly...

overall: 70/100

vote: LK
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Old 07-07-04, 07:53 PM   #27
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breakdown:
(latinkittens pic)
Why is this bitch talking shit, ^Carla do you really mean this?
Coz we got shit in common . . . like the size of our penis.
^that works.. but that could go either way.. she might not have a penis *gasps*nah hehe.. good line
You’re the meanest for looks, dam baby your best,
N im lovin u long locks of hair . . . across your back and chest.
^iite
Let her confess she is a dood, then send the bitch to hell,
Theo was shocked as hell, that kitten got the balls to step
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .And itch aswell.
^huh ?
Quit ya acting, u wanna fuck me, remember that UK trip,
Where your fat arse lost 100 pounds……buying fish and chips.
^wtf man..maybe this needed to be explained..
Ya got fat lips and hips, you need to shed the pounds,
Coz carla’s waist is only 5 inches. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
. . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . away from hitting the ground.
^is she fat or sumthing lol ?
Ya verses aren’t sound, ya HIGHLIGHTING hurts ya,
And its kool to be curved, but not so much so that ur circular.
^lol.. ok
You fake project bitch, one of those “I’m ghetto and hussle”,
When confessing your gender switch, was your only form of a struggle.
Give this dog a muzzle, fuck it let him kick the bucket,
And u can ride my dick in battles, but he wants to suck it.
Your nufin, you use weak punches that are so played up,
That the Old Skool heads, claimed that their daddies made up.
Beat this dood in make up, like gothic mosh pits,
And if u think the truth is wack, then your just being honest.
Aint on this level of mine, no matter what im better than you,
And WOW your femcee of the month…theres only about 7 of you.
Im exceptional with sciptures, ur picture gave you this loss,
While me similar to your dress code, im getting you cross.
Get off my dick, insulting my race is played,
& no doubt this Spaniard will clean house . . . when she works as a maid.
^getting you irate, you hate the way I abuse ya,
the fact your post count is near mine. . . . . . . . .
& you been here half the time proves ur a loser.
Ya may be used to nerves, but the chills were no omen,
That Theo would drop Latin like a modern day roman.
Ownin you with words, don’t care if your homo or hedro,
You can diss my previous wack names . . . . . . . . . . . . .
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .but there all way better than pedro.
Perhaps on some sites, theres a place her face will make it in,
Because she looks like the type of angel . . . . . . . . . . .
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . that rides Harley Davison.
This chik gets a lot of numbers, but don’t get it twisted,
^coz I am referring to the amount of peeps she blacklisted.
Rockin a sig of known kids, beggin for recognition,
Coz her taking this battle is like the plague re-existing.
Use ya fake personals, that picture was a fuckin joke hoe,
And ill destroy another personal…..am I resolve?..…………NO!

APO:^sorry got tired of breaking all that down.. thats some long as shit on the reall.......ok id give that verse 8/10.. it was pretty good.. i liked the wordplay.. a few metas i think i saw.. and the punches were pretty good.. but before i read this, you went strait her picture.. which to me is gettings really played.. thats all people ever do now. nor orignal idea...

LK:i was feelin this verse.. your punches werepretty on point.. you had a few links that pointed to personals.. was really feelin this.. punch catagory was Lk.. and really punchlines is what win you battles.. not just personals.. there for i have to give this to LK.. both dropped some pretty tight verses tho.. big ups.

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