Ups to both of you.

State capitol came straight out and was on point. Had a good opener, and he used very good metas while he was throwing punches. All the while he flow was on point, and his structure almost remained ok. Personals were right on point in his flow as well. Didnt really see any multis though.

Canopy you opened up good, I liked the line about him getting action. After that you didnt really throw many punches, and you had a few lines in there that didnt rhyme, like your closer...which made you battle close weak. Try to use some more metas so that you can come up with more creative stuff. Your flow was a lil off also, throw in some multis and that should help it out some. Not too bad of a verse though, elevate a lil bit and youll be on point.

v/State Capitol