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Old 07-06-04, 06:15 PM   #1
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The Takeover off the top B's up

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OG's tell me you betta hit the block and start selling them drugs/ I'm caddilac pimping like i'm with the young bloods/ been hustling packs since my projects in east north cac had that flood/ i'm straped wit a fitted cap and a dub/ and i don't give a fuck if half of these niggas don't show me love/ cause I spit for my hard bitches and my NC thugs/ this post here ain't for the sweet/ I'll leave you dead with your foot on the gas pedal riding down the street/ always been a smart nigga neva dumb/ it's good that everybody got heart now/but how that gonna pump when the pump make him lose they lungs/ that's so true it make me laugh like comicview/ i know dudes who always think about lics/ but most of them just love robing too/ they don't give back to the poor/ they sling that crack from that raw/ Boling in a glass jar/ broadday bumrush ya door/ put a nine to ya head and tell ya bitch ass to get on the floor/ tell ya my mans is feeling ya whore/ take that stash, where the cash i won't more/ walk away leave and go to the store/this murk the boy/ most niggas who rap be faker than a toy/ I have dreams of going to jamaca on tour/ cause I plan on becoming the dirtysouth version of tupac shukur/ I could disrespect ya hood for life let off poping a duce duce twice/ don't be mad cause ya baby mama's wanna be my wife/ cause when she around me she herself in the mirror because of the ice/nucca piru4life
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Old 07-06-04, 08:03 PM   #2
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dat peice was decent but u could improve by addin multi's and harder punches and just making it all flow together but the idea was nice
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