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Old 07-07-04, 09:45 PM   #1
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State Capitol Vs Polifick

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alright fam lez do this shit

8 lines
no d/r cv or biting
2 hours to spit after check in
blind spit
good luck


Did not check in, so counting this post's time as the checkin time... Battle closed because you missed 2 hour deadline
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Old 07-07-04, 10:41 PM   #2
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Catching The Most L The Only Time U a Legend In Tha Making...
Thought It Was 9 Realized Oh 5 Is Yo Lyrical Suceed Rating....
Didnt Want Kno 1 2 Kno??So he Can Battle Newbies Prefect....
Kid Knows He's Wack...He Already Admits He Not a Vet ....
The #1 Mug Shotter Goin Around Wit His Pix "Oh Lookie".....
State Capitol Non Spelling Killabwoy...2 Ways U A Rookie ....
Flow Ugly Like sam Cassell...Punches Is What He Lacks...
Instead Of hardwood Classics...Yo Lyrics Is more Swing Backs...
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Old 07-08-04, 12:36 AM   #3
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Claim's He's King Of RB but his lines are below Peasant Status..
Talented? , everyone see's you as "Piece Of Ass", Like Trish Status..
Polifick's Gear Fits his skills, this herbs rockin' a Utah Jazz Throwback..
Physical Abuse, Have you Performing The same operation as Michael,kid your not Black..
Lines Backfire, Inflict pain in your lip,
.............................thats the only reason your similar to Hove..
Still fails to type heat,
.......after his keyboard spent 2 hours burning on the stove..
Call Cassidy, cause Polifick's Wack raps are an "issue"..
Don't Worry this loss won't be a memorable thought,
After I pierce My lines Right Through your Brain Tissue..
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Old 07-08-04, 12:54 AM   #4
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POLIFICK

Catching The Most L The Only Time U a Legend In Tha Making...
Thought It Was 9 Realized Oh 5 Is Yo Lyrical Suceed Rating....
Wasnt really a strong opener.. coulda been better..
Didnt Want Kno 1 2 Kno??So he Can Battle Newbies Prefect....
Kid Knows He's Wack...He Already Admits He Not a Vet ....
Not a bad punch....
The #1 Mug Shotter Goin Around Wit His Pix "Oh Lookie".....
State Capitol Non Spelling Killabwoy...2 Ways U A Rookie ....
nice punch....
Flow Ugly Like sam Cassell...Punches Is What He Lacks...
Instead Of hardwood Classics...Yo Lyrics Is more Swing Backs...
better closer.. a lot better then your opener
Your structure was pretty good.. your opener wasnt the best ive seen from you, your punches were alright, and your closer was better then your opener for sure...

STATE
Claim's He's King Of RB but his lines are below Peasant Status..
Talented? , everyone see's you as "Piece Of Ass", Like Trish Status..
Nice opener.... spelt wrong so it makes it look like STATUS and STATUS
Polifick's Gear Fits his skills, this herbs rockin' a Utah Jazz Throwback..
Physical Abuse, Have you Performing The same operation as Michael,kid your not Black..
lil stretched.. but nice punch...
Lines Backfire, Inflict pain in your lip,
.............................thats the only reason your similar to Hove..
Still fails to type heat,
.......after his keyboard spent 2 hours burning on the stove..
Nice punch...
Call Cassidy, cause Polifick's Wack raps are an "issue"..
Don't Worry this loss won't be a memorable thought,
After I pierce My lines Right Through your Brain Tissue..
Nice closer...

you had good punches.. a nice opener and closer, and overall you had a better verse.. your structure was off at times, but your punches overshadowed that problem.

Overall vote goes to State Capitol, as I believe he had better punches in his verse... anyways good battle to read... good luck to both

vote - State
 
Old 07-08-04, 01:00 AM   #5
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good battle..state ur flow was hot, and ur punches hit pretty hard

Claim's He's King Of RB but his lines are below Peasant Status..
Talented? , everyone see's you as "Piece Of Ass", Like Trish Status..
^nice opener and good personal..

Polifick's Gear Fits his skills, this herbs rockin' a Utah Jazz Throwback..
Physical Abuse, Have you Performing The same operation as Michael,kid your not Black..
^second line a little stretched but it was a punch, ur flow was ok

Lines Backfire, Inflict pain in your lip,
.............................thats the only reason your similar to Hove..
Still fails to type heat,
.......after his keyboard spent 2 hours burning on the stove..
^liked the style, nice flow and a pretty good punch

Call Cassidy, cause Polifick's Wack raps are an "issue"..
Don't Worry this loss won't be a memorable thought,
After I pierce My lines Right Through your Brain Tissue..
^liked the cassidy line, flow was tight here

overall ur verse was pretty good but i have seen better from u 20/30

polifick ur verse was iight u had nice flow and some punches hit

Catching The Most L The Only Time U a Legend In Tha Making...
Thought It Was 9 Realized Oh 5 Is Yo Lyrical Suceed Rating....
^good personal nice opener

Didnt Want Kno 1 2 Kno??So he Can Battle Newbies Prefect....
Kid Knows He's Wack...He Already Admits He Not a Vet ....
^another personal and nice punch, flow was ok

The #1 Mug Shotter Goin Around Wit His Pix "Oh Lookie".....
State Capitol Non Spelling Killabwoy...2 Ways U A Rookie ....
^good flow, personal but not really a hard hittin punch

Flow Ugly Like sam Cassell...Punches Is What He Lacks...
Instead Of hardwood Classics...Yo Lyrics Is more Swing Backs...
^not to good of a closer and the sam cassel line is played

ur verse was decent but state's punches hit harder ur verse was 18/30
v/state
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Old 07-08-04, 01:09 AM   #6
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ok kinda weak battle

Polifick...weka verse son, your closer was alrite but thats the only line that gets any respect, your flow was ok, structure need to be tighted up, metas well you tried but it just didn't work, personals again you tried but nope it didn't really work.

Flow: 6/10
Punches: 6/10
Personals: 5/10
Metas: 5/10
Structure: 4/10
Overall: 26/50

State.....nice opener, that was ya verse's highlight, but the micheal punch was bad that brought your verse down, an you did go downhill from the opener, your metas were weak but a lil stronger than polificks, your flow coulda been better, strucure I wasn't feeling it.

Flow: 5/10
Punches: 7/10
Personals: 5/10
Metas: 7/10
Structure: 5/10
Overall: 29/50
Vote: State
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Old 07-08-04, 02:05 AM   #7
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POLIFICK

Catching The Most L The Only Time U a Legend In Tha Making...
Thought It Was 9 Realized Oh 5 Is Yo Lyrical Suceed Rating....
Aight.. coulda been better..
Didnt Want Kno 1 2 Kno??So he Can Battle Newbies Prefect....
Kid Knows He's Wack...He Already Admits He Not a Vet ....
aight for a punch....
The #1 Mug Shotter Goin Around Wit His Pix "Oh Lookie".....
State Capitol Non Spelling Killabwoy...2 Ways U A Rookie ....
Decent in My book....
Flow Ugly Like sam Cassell...Punches Is What He Lacks...
Instead Of hardwood Classics...Yo Lyrics Is more Swing Backs...
Pretty good closiner..

STATE
Claim's He's King Of RB but his lines are below Peasant Status..
Talented? , everyone see's you as "Piece Of Ass", Like Trish Status..
Nice opener....
Polifick's Gear Fits his skills, this herbs rockin' a Utah Jazz Throwback..
Physical Abuse, Have you Performing The same operation as Michael,kid your not Black..
Stretched but secent
Lines Backfire, Inflict pain in your lip,
.............................thats the only reason your similar to Hove..
Still fails to type heat,
.......after his keyboard spent 2 hours burning on the stove..
ok for a punch...
Call Cassidy, cause Polifick's Wack raps are an "issue"..
Don't Worry this loss won't be a memorable thought,
After I pierce My lines Right Through your Brain Tissue..
Pretty good for a closiner But aight...

Aight you did good and you had structure but I think you lacked
in some things

Pretty good but structure was decent and you had harder punches
and metaphores
vote - State
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Old 07-08-04, 05:25 AM   #8
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uupin this...........4-0 me....................one more vote in this shit
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Old 07-08-04, 06:09 AM   #9
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Aight guys it was an aight battle but in both ur cases i have seen better

Pro: Dawg was an aight verse, nice structure and also had sum decent wordplay too. Ur flow was aight to read but seemed a bit basic...which was a good thing, sum of the punches were on point and also you used sum ok metas.

State: Another good verse it had a lil bit of a stretched structure but ur flow made up for that, again the punches were hard hittin and also u used sum decent wordplay and metas. I think ur verse was as equally as good as Prolificks except u used links which were well used in the verse and that is why ur gonn get my vote.

V/SC equall match up jus used more to win
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