i called out...he accepted...

10 lines
no biting
no crew/hate votes
no feeding
u spit first

good luck...

young_bleek
-he posted in the bitchslapped thread...this is his verse...-

yea its ya boy young bleek and I'm strapped wit dem thangz/ And all my niggaz will leave ure gutz ta hang/ And this freestyle im spittin dont get it twisted fo a anthem/ Nigga i'll have u holdin ure chest u would swear we was reciting tha national anthem/ U cant beat me get it right homey/ I put 8 to ure back u would swear u was kobe/ U rep da Hardwood Class- sickz/ well my flow is madd sick/ leave yo ass in a body bag and make ure moms madd sick/ u thinkin thatz it/nigga u kno i aint done/ and when u see me ya betta run/ cuz my gun is fully loadin like a bunch of mexicanz!

In.

ill let u have the 3 extra lines u posted...

...im about to go to an orthodontist appointment, and then to my dads house...so i wont be on until the morning tomorrow (as in 1 am to 3 am, cause im goin out) so ill key when i get on later...

and trust me...i wont pre-write...i wont need too...

ill post when i get back online...pz...

ha ha ha...young_bleek?...r u fuckin kiddin me...

i aint wastin good lines on this faggot...ill just half ass this...

check it out...yo, yo...

i kill young wit grace...he has to chase to get me, but i bomb his base
i mean...even the location he lives at is named after a fuckin disgrace!
he aint at my pace...how can young drop that wack, im perplexed still
cause young even has to recruit so his crew can have good text skill!
ur next to grill...bitch everyone knows ur wack, ur shit doesnt intrigue
and now young wants to throw punches?...
...the dumbass couldnt even get into the league!**
ur quick to fatigue...cause man, i lied about this bout, im leavin ya dead
but dawg...ur skills r just empty...just like ur fuckin crew tryout thread!
say bye to any doubt ahead, ur wack, and ur shit ull be left on the shelf
but whats the point of murderin u man?...
...when u can just as easily do it urself!***

*he lives in Clinton, NC...Bill Clinton was a disgraceful president

**he was denied a spot in the punchline league

***his 'rapperz' is named young_bleek, and it has 0 health

lol mimesis merk this fool easily

young_Bleek
yea its ya boy young bleek and I'm strapped wit dem thangz/ And all my niggaz will leave ure gutz ta hang/ And this freestyle im spittin dont get it twisted fo a anthem/
WOW^^ man that was pretty wack for an openerNigga i'll have u holdin ure chest u would swear we was reciting tha national anthem/
next time can you make you structure better ...but again wackU cant beat me get it right homey/ I put 8 to ure back u would swear u was kobe/
wtf that didnt even rhymesU rep da Hardwood Class- sickz/ well my flow is madd sick/ you just said sick rhymes with sick wow good job!!leave yo ass in a body bag and make ure moms madd sick/ u thinkin thatz it/nigga u kno i aint done/
man damn your verse is wack so farand when u see me ya betta run/ cuz my gun is fully loadin like a bunch of mexicanz!omg its over you verse is one of the worst ive seen in rapbattles realunched

[b]mimesis
i kill young wit grace...he has to chase to get me, but i bomb his base
i mean...even the location he lives at is named after a fuckin disgrace!
nice opener ..had a decent punchlines
he aint at my pace...how can young drop that wack, im perplexed still
cause young even has to recruit so his crew can have good text skill!
lol.. nice personal
ur next to grill...bitch everyone knows ur wack, ur shit doesnt intrigue
and now young wants to throw punches?...
iight decent punchlines
...the dumbass couldnt even get into the league!**
ur quick to fatigue...cause man, i lied about this bout, im leavin ya dead
lol.. nice personals he could get in the text league hahaha/b]
but dawg...ur skills r just empty...just like ur fuckin crew tryout thread!
say bye to any doubt ahead, ur wack, and ur shit ull be left on the shelf
[b]lol... another nice personals ... its already over
but whats the point of murderin u man?...
...when u can just as easily do it urself!***
Lol..decent finisher

easily vote=mimesis

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umm,this was totally a one sided battle young bleek you had nothin in your verse,im not tryin ta hate,but ya had no structure,flow,punches,humour"NOTHING" sorry dawg you practically gave this battle away.....
mimesis:you took all catagories in this battle,you won it with you first bar...i don't think i gotta explain anymore my vote goes to mimesis...vote/mimesis

please return the favour:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134020
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130025
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134245

^^thanx for the votes...

2-0 me...

UPPIN # 1 !!!!

leave a link and ill return the favor...

Mimesis easily won this. His punches were coming hard and straight towards bleek. Fix ur structure up bleek and maybe you could start beatin people. Mimesis gets tha vote with harder punches and an easier structure ta follow.

Vote- Mimesis

Vote on this: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134177

or this: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134111

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UPPIN # 2 !!!

cmon, just end this shit....

2-0 me uppin...

Well, I'd do a breakdown, but I don't really think it's necessarry.. bleek, posting with a structure like that will lose almost every battle for you.. Not only is it hard to follow, it tends to make the flow more choppy.. You lacked personals and metas and your punches didn't hit as hard as they should have.. Don't give up, just work on some of your weaker points and you should be shinin' in no time.. As for this one, it was pretty much one sided, and Mimesis hit much harder, with a much more organized verse. Much respect for both of ya..

v/Mimesis

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