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07-09-04, 02:23 PM | #1 | |||
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Envy Ft. Country
IP: C1DA C961
Tha Untouchables back for the first time wit that crazy shit
read, rate, n reply ta this Country: Yo Storm dawg show these mutherfuckers why we can't be touched Reign Storm: Aight dawg, yo :: Reign Storm :: Reign Storm comin' from times ancient, never the fake shit I still quote mad words from the rhyme sages Spit some ill shit myself, trapped between the blue lines Performed a few shows and bound for more in due time Felt like the Microphone was a weapon I kicked more ass with words than I did in Tekken Writin' made me happy, though I wrote words of darkness Start shit, knock you unconscious, and then I talked shit Mad footwork, I had my future set Unless of course, I caught the luger's breath But that's the price I pay for livin' and constant sinnin' Knowin' the shit I commit ain't forgiven My life and times is a work in progress That's nonsense, Shit son, the life you lead in monstrous Gotta get yourself on track, that's what's up Some say I ain't gonna make it, that's fucked up Country: Haha yeah thats what I meant Stratejus: Aye I know u got something ta say homey Country: yeah let me fill these mutherfuckers in on Country, yo :: Country :: Country the silent-assasin, bring words wit violence-attached-in I'm only dafiant-ta-whack-men, its Country the whole worlds been tryin-ta-smash-him How are we not compliant-wit-rap-when, not even science-could-match-them I've got an alliance-wit-black-pens, Tha Untouchables makin tha tightest-tracks-spin Fuck it I'm swingin the lightest-bats-then, I'm taking your mic-bitch Your fuckin lyrics wouldn't be tight-kid, if u put each word in a vice-grip I've heard u dykes-spit, some aight-shit, but nothin compared ta my-scripts Got you cats on a suicide-trip, your killin yourself talkin bout iced-wrists Claimin how fucked up life-is, when most of u can't even legally buy-discs Country had u mutherfuckers sized-quick, faster then the scottish rides-dick Yeah I'll run u down in time-trick, but for now I'd rather smoke-weed Go on another fuckin coke-spree, till I wake up in the hospital from nose-bleeds Storm these bitches dont wanna know-me, I've got gravel in my hair I'm so-street I'm not an O.G., I should be a cook as much as I love ta roast-beef Sit back n watch Geneicide deep throat-C, then pistol whip em with his own-gun Bitch u a gangster? so-what, the sperm of william wallace is all your ever gonna throw-up Country: Fuck it dawg lets go cypher on em Reign Storm: Aight, yo :: Reign Storm :: Kid got his chest blown, moms got hope-in-urgency Cats like us expose ya organs like open-surgery :: Country :: My mouths a glock-kid, the slightest sound could cock-it These fuckin nouns-is-rockets, spittin lyrics till the crowd-gets-nasious :: Reign Storm :: You want this war more-fair, then put a fuckin' mortar-there It's mental warfare, got your fuckin' thought importer-scared :: Country :: Emcee's leavin tape recorders-bare, n just givin rap-up If u bitches, was just Big Kountry, u still wouldn't be half-us :: Reign Storm :: Now our rhymes is too raw, shit this ill should be illegal Get caught and drawn in by the talons of the desert eagle :: Country :: We're fuckin never-feeble, always comin hard-yo Deliver so many sharp-blows, u'd think I have razors where my arms-go :: Reign Storm :: Obliteratin' those who hatin', our styles' repulsive Shockin' cats with words, like our glands produced electric pulses |
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07-09-04, 03:09 PM | #2 | |||||||
*Da FeMaLe BaNdIT*
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IP: 80BF FE23
The contest of this was obviously well thought out and projected well through yall words--I appreciated the substance of this one...its not bullshit its real..I liked da mulites and the rhymes scheme was good..the structure could have been better but it worked..the flow was good too...AYE YOO keep this shit up on da reals *ONES*
SB
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07-09-04, 08:50 PM | #3 | |||||
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IP: C1DA C961
very deep and dope piece i was feeling the whole thing...country once again you amaze me with your usage of wordplay and multies structure was a lil choppy but besides that your verse was really solid and had good depth...reign storm you also impressed me...your verse was also solid and the flow was really consistent...good wordplay and usage of words...decent vocab structure could have been a little better but overall good verse from you also...and that cypher was some fire shyt good multies and strong points really feeling this definately my vote for open mic for july keep em coming ~!1!~
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07-09-04, 09:53 PM | #4 | |||
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IP: 3240 794D
good lookin flow...but hey...i have to give credit to Country. he's the 1 that brought this idea to me. but neways...thanks Flow n Spoken...
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07-09-04, 10:32 PM | #5 | ||||
Jumpin' Along
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IP: C56C 93CC
nice peice... it was really good i was fellin it the whole way.. good colab both
can you hit up one of my open mics please thank you
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07-09-04, 11:08 PM | #6 | |||
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IP: 3240 794D
sure thing lethal...uppin
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07-10-04, 11:12 PM | #7 | |||||
Flyweight
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IP: 4289 77F4
yo flow...thanks man...uppin
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07-11-04, 10:00 PM | #8 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 4289 77F4
I think the structure was just fine,and the vocab was as well...over all I think both mc's brought there vision to life,and it was easy for me to understand them threw there words....so i give them over all a 10 because if I like something I like it...
There no hating in my blood....Nice work you two...and keep it up....God bless...1
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