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5 | 62.50% |
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07-10-04, 02:30 AM
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Bitches I've Sonned
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IP: 2199 5F7D
TRIPLE N:
Ya shit was flowin, it had good structure it never fell off, the topic u went into was real deep i liked that..its not easy to talk about anger but it felt like u knew how to express it more than shadow..ur vocabulary was good aswell..and your wordplay was good.. SHADOW: Man..you dropped ya shit nice to..ya vocabulary was really really good..i didnt think your wordplay really beat Trip's..ur structure was good it never fell off aswell but i didnt think you were more "expressive" in the topic than Triple N.. Vote--Triple N
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07-10-04, 04:34 PM
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IP: 4289 77F4
Triple N-Kindof Off Topic and Had some Decent Vocab but Not That
Much there and Pretty not much imagenry though but overall hit verse Shadow-You had flow and stuff and nice structure making it easy to read and stayed focused and Imaginery leaving it a Overall Hot verse v.Shadow
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07-10-04, 04:35 PM
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IP: C56C 93CC
triple n:
Your verse was really choppy you really got off topic.. you were basically talkin about how hard it is to be black... and not anger...your emotion's were iight but shadow.. had alot better...mutlies okay...flow was decent but ive seen you do alot better...your structure was alittle off a times and if could have been better if the lines were very streteched/...overall it was a good topical but ive seen you do alot better and i really think that shadow took this one shadow nice topical... you took this topical easily you stayed on topic... you had some nice flow... good emotion's and nice ... imagery.... you really had some nice structure i liked the way you put it in the middle and .. your verse was never off topic... so just for that you won.. vote-shadow
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07-10-04, 05:15 PM
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you gotta hear me again
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IP: 1E3A CEDB
tripe n wasn't taking about anger if you ask me his was more about hate which leads to anger. however the flow and style was very nice and i do admitt that you got really into it. um some of the time it sounded like you were mad that you were black but i probably misread. i liked the complexity of it and the vocab was right except for a couple (can't get em all). lines that i really liked were the opener and closer you started off strong and end strong but sometimes in the middle you were weak. big up.
when i started reading it i thought that "anger" was going to be said in every line, lol. one thing that you have to change (in my opinion) is that style i don't like it centered. however, the flow good, and the vocab (i think) was all correct. you were lacking in the complexity this time. you get deep in all these topic battles man and you good. i liked that you stayed focused and was always about the anger. the lines seemed strong the whole time and you had more metaphor that i could tell. good job and my vote is for you. vote: shadow
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