ok house rules let make it fun 20-30 you first then i'll go.
no bitten/
no pre written/
no recycling/
due by monday
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Yo....

He must not kno ive been sendin call outs for him
Until he checked the weak ass Twisted Government crew Forum
Im bout to demolish this actor he cant handle my verses
Im after this clown for a Confidental purpose
Imed this cat sayin....Bmorehustla247: But still i hope you ready to lose
Metaphorically speakin this murderin will be on the news
Dawg knos he's takin a L sayin.....AKAsoloKillah: i sure am
Thats the reason why his weak ass crew only have four men(not count him)
You wish you could be hard like Street Legend, A.K.A im a Street Felon
Fuck that im gutta too............Ill put the heat to the reverend
Why you steppin, like you actually contestin
Askin me questions like a game show contestant
These 20 lines from me while leave ya brain scrambled
Think you nice cuz you lead a crew, ill blow ya pride out like a candle
Doc the only time you hard is when you havin wet dreams
When the tech scream, you runnin for ya mommy
Cuz you can be sure I got The Jury behind me
This battle right here is a win, Ill battle all ya men
Steppin to the Legend thats a cardinal sin
Im here to put Twisted government to sleep
Im activatin A.k.a perm wit the heat
Doc this is a mans game you betta stay in ya place
You cant beat me, you got a betta chance out dancin Diddy and Mase

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yo chills of fear go down your spine, as flows of talent come up mine//
there an ak in my name so you better take that as a sign//
you thing you a legend in the street, just because you stay face down in the concrete//
and cats like you I step on you better watch out for my cleat//
i'ma leave you with amnesa cause you ain’t gonna no where my bar is//
you being accused of sucking and the jury is out your guilty of all charges//
the sentence, stopping rapping and acting cause you ain’t hard//
don’t go against me cause I leave a wangsta scared//
dude you couldn’t spin shit (his avatar) even if you were high and tipsy//
dude you can call me a waiter cause I’ll show you where the hollow tips be//
look dude you just a piece of shit you could be less but you can’t bmore//
after I kill, to follow the blood will have to go on a city tour//
whats in this case will put you to rest (his title)/ show you I’m not some one to test//
why do we even have a pole we all know who the best//
when he came to this site he was all begging for me to vote now he think he can start beef//
but shit like that will put you under the water like the barrier reef//
made it 20 lines so everyone could see how you lines is played out//
your ass better dry out, let everyone no bmores gonna have a drout//
this bullet will make you like a teapot only now blood coming out your spout//
you keep calling me one but the truth is that you afraid of clowns//
the jury says I win and you keep objecting under false grounds//

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Lmfao

Opener- SL
Closer - SL
Flow - SL
Structer - SL
Punches - SL
Wordplay - SL

VOTE - SL

AKA - man u really need 2 not stretch ya bars that long it makes ya shit wack and sum shit u wrote is juss Blah man... Re-read b4 u post...

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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As Life Goes On Mixtape Try Outs All Good Audio Heads Peep

THAT WAS A KOO BATTLE,gotta agree here^^^

Opener- SL
Closer - SL
Flow - SL
Structer - SL
Punches - SL
Wordplay - SL

SL-i thought you came with alot in this battle,i really liked your ryme scheme,punches were nice/not played,good structure,nice drop....

AKA -i liked your verse but you got 2 many stretched lines,n not enough wordplay,i thought your closer was really close 2,but overall SL got this..
n A.K.A this aint a hate vote i jus thought he had the better verse dawg..
_VOTE/Street Legend

please return the favour"vote honest":
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130025 skforty7
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134245 gunit
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134328 stank

Street:
I think you did ya best in this battle..ya had some ok woirdplay...struc...was ok..personals was very good..personal...are very good in a battle...i think you use some ok multies...some ok vocab..i liuke the last line ...it was ok..but i think you could have did better in tyhe closer...overal...7/10

A.K.A-
I think you struc was very bad..but ya vocab....helped it out...i think you had soem played lines..but some ok personals...i think you wordplay...is not that bad...but. think you punches lacked a little bit but an overall good battle but i think street won this battle..No beef....6.5/10

Vote sl

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Yo heres my votes

Personals: a.k.a
Vocab:a.k.a
Everything else: SL

Street: that was a real nice flow wit good structure n enough multis ill give u a 8/10

A.K.A: like killa said u got a weak structure but ur vocab is tight... u had some good personals but weak punches thats the main reason SL got dis one 6/10

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the new testamin ft. anxiety (must see)

Bubba Bible Ft. Ajax[/SIZE]

This battle was really close for real.Both could work on their structures and make them better.Street Legend edged out AKA with punches by a hair.The flow wasn't that good from either of you because your structures were not good.Next time try to add some multies in there and a lil to more wordplay.But Street got my vote for punches.Both need to work on the structure though.

Vote=Street Legend

Hit my battles up.I did take the time to read this long shit.

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