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Old 07-10-04, 06:18 PM   #1
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Post IN LOVE (topical)

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yea this is a mission for my topical crew IN LOVE


in love for tha first time in my life it feel's like perpetiul bliss~
her beatiful eyez my knees start to quiver i shiver when we kiss~
i'll be wit this girl to tha end she just not my girl she my best friend~
if it was me or her i swear in a second my life i would lend~
and she is very pretty but it's not all about tha sexual attraction~
we got tha soul mate love like finish the other's sentence in a quick reaction
i feel like this women was sent from up above like a pure white dove~
she moves so gracefully hey what can i say i'm in LOVE....
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Old 07-10-04, 07:15 PM   #2
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nice job good strucutre evrything was good.. good flow..u kept it short and sweet..
good job..keep reppin mosaic..overall 8.7/10 haha nice
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Old 07-10-04, 07:17 PM   #3
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yo thankz man
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Old 07-10-04, 07:49 PM   #4
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Uppin For Sum Backfeed
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Old 07-10-04, 08:17 PM   #5
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nice stuff had some nice structure... good flow...

nice job hit one of my open mics please
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Old 07-11-04, 06:46 PM   #6
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uppin this shit.........................
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Old 07-11-04, 07:08 PM   #7
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??????????any1???????????any1????????????any1????? ???
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Old 07-11-04, 07:25 PM   #8
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its okish but shes very pretty killed it...........i did bettr shit fo a chick tat i wanted an it worked.......but thats real so motivation was highed..............but keep it up....
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Old 07-11-04, 07:30 PM   #9
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i did not understand a word u just said but since it was my open mic i'm asumen u was tryin to say it was hot haha uppin
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Old 07-11-04, 09:48 PM   #10
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aight i'm runin outta pillow's this is bein slept on se much
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Old 07-11-04, 09:49 PM   #11
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so much is what i ment now come give feedback
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Old 07-12-04, 02:56 AM   #12
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unconfirmed collab: IN LOVE part 2. my title: "Love Is"

love is more than perpetual bliss...
...a liability that none can resist, either love or be condoned.
love is more than lovers actions have shown...
...a remedy of dreams when one is alone, either love or die incomplete.
love is more than apologetic gifts can delete...
...a sort of slavery you just cant defeat, love is sereal.
love is a hex that you dont see, hear, or feel...
...a simple attraction that some dont appeal, love is prison.
love is torture and burdened but always can be risen...
...a physical knot where sex is a given, love is a finance.
love is the reason women are a major appliance...
...a inovative system of science, love is made of grudges.
love is a trail of red roses to wear the tub is...
...a substance of why god is above us, this is what love is.
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Old 07-14-04, 03:28 AM   #13
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^^wtf w/e lol we must think a same
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Old 07-14-04, 03:29 AM   #14
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uppin this shit people leave sum feedback
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