u know da deal

you could have just answered a simple question, check

postpone it for 45 mins, ill be back at 8:15, i swear

im throwin punches like tyson in trainin
keep flowin like nights when its rainin
i fukk around and leave ya wife complainin
you make da mic complain
while i remain to leave these rappers in shame
and they start to hide but i say" i see you"
va probably livin in "icu"
he gets no pussy so his guys turn blue
youll be surprised what ya moms thighs can do
but you wont be thinkin dat when i aim da 45 at you
i ride in crews while you ride in twos
i seen you in "Lockdown" why you let them guys in you?

super:none of your punches hit in my eyes.. i dont mean to seem blunt, but i wasent really feeling your verse that much... id say elevation on your punches coukld help you..

va:your structure was a little annoying.. you had some nice multies int here tho.. your verse was a lil bit filler, but the punches that oyu did put out actually hit, so id have to say this battle was yours..

Vote/Va

Return a honest ovte here..
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134057

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Decent battle. Wasnt feelin a lot of it.

va: Ya had a pretty decent flow, and I picked up on the three line bars there at the beginning. Not really many punches were bein thrown rom ya though, talkin about his guys bein blue. Kinda the stuff that anyone can think of, you need to get a lil more creative with it, and personal. Throw in some good metas, and some multies and itll help ya flow, and make ya verse sound sick. Just basically need to come harder.

supercilious: I aint catch on to ya flow really, you had a lot of streched lines, then some short lines. The structure was just all out of place. Your opener was cool, but it really was just all about you. You did have a few good meta in there, I think that lifted your battle over his, and the punches were aight. I liked the way you ended the battle, but once again you didnt really direct that towards him. You need to come harder also.

Overall battle goes to supercilious for being a lil more creative, and throwin more punches.

v/supercilious

wow straight up va took everything on the real structure flow punches ecerything super was just wack

votes: VA no real explanaintion needed

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va, like calamity said, i wasnt feelin your structure, but your punches were better, uh, your flow stayed solid with that weird scheme, your vocab was alright but could have been better, i mean it was an ok verse overall.

super, this was your first battle wasnt it? not to sound mean, but that was not good. the rhymes were all typical, recycled-sounding shit and the flow was weak at best. just keep practicing, youll get better..

vote-va

return the favor

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134532

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quote your own damn lyrics...

aight,

super: heard it before... basic flow, weak punches.. could have been a hell of a lot better...

VA: dont know what possessed you to structure like that but i still felt your flow.. well incd multies, pretty hard punches... wasnt feelin the closer though

v/ VA

could you guys hit up my battle with big woody? its in my sig.. just 2 more votes n its closed.. cmon


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