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Old 07-12-04, 12:15 AM   #1
minosa
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Exclamation if you want real lyrics........

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The mics recording, the Michael Jordan,Of this hip hop,
Jeff Gordon on the track, aint no pit stops,
The kid rocks, I drop plots over snares and bass drops,
Please notice my stock, I wont stop til you bounce like bad shocks,

I will lead the flock, from Savannah to Bangkok,
please, follow the king
Not a thing, no human being, is this interes-ting,
Heavy bars on the track, this weight-lifting,


So basically, I’m off the cuff,
That’s unrehearsed, If ya vocab aint all that tough,
Chalk up ya spot, when ya boy walks up,
See through your disguise,
20/20 aint just a show, It’s the type of my eyes,

The portraits I paint, are marvelous,
No horsing around, the mic is my harness, god bless,
My opponents, no contest, more-less you wasting your breath,
No replacing the best
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Old 07-12-04, 01:21 AM   #2
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wack~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 07-12-04, 02:12 AM   #3
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not really a good piece could use some elevation....your vocab aint very big and ya flow kinda choppy....work on that and your gold....BUT you've got potential though
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Old 07-12-04, 07:06 PM   #4
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dayumm work on ya spittin than you elevate yo not bad though
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Old 07-13-04, 11:41 AM   #5
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fuck what these guys wrote..........u know ur style is different and thats what makes it hot......obviously this guy aint a idiot, u can tell by his flow structure and word play......keep it up dog......like ur shit...fuck wha these cats r sayin bout it.......
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