He is my boi off MSN so he must have Potential to know me ..
G'luck and..
pz.


3-0 KO win

check in drop as soon as your ready..
will key sumthin soon..
pz.

Say Checkin' to this battle G'uck so let's get the battle started

yo yo my name is archmage/i'm slient one /like a slient bomb thats about to go off/if u get in my way/you gonna get courch to death/only my peeps respect me/i make the devil run away/ god fears me / if u mess with me / u are gonna mess with my crew/ my crew will fuck anyone up that messes with me/ i'll ripe people's hearts out/ feed them to my dog/ but before that/choke you to death unit ur thoart is black and blue/ripe ur neck off/piss down your thoart/ watch ur body decay/than go after ur family / make bullets hole through there chests/steal all there money/give the money to the poor/make u squell like a lil girl/if u don't i'll but a 40 ozzi to ta face/than blow your brains out/u fuck with me/u are gonna get fucked up

New to RB only personal i would need to get the Win..
tryin to diss me?
...well im gona knock you back like you was Gin..
just 3 posts and stepping to a rep vet?
asked me to call you out...
but your custom text said "I haven't posted yet"..
your fucking wack. i mean who raps about guns still..
put a tablet in sum rice crispies...*
............................Just to say you popped a pill..
I checked your life's history, endless chapters of misery..
Now repp your sig sayin..
"Just let me say Rascal just whored me, easily and officially"..
Broke down this hoecake, ok i give up with all the mocking
Your verse has got..
.................. jokes not punches and seriously....... im not joking..


there is 10 for you...
he told me he had potential on Msn that is why we are battling..
pz.

fucks sake Leave a link and i GAURENTE iwill vote on it..
pz.

DMX 1

yo yo my name is archmage/i'm slient one /like a slient bomb thats about to go off/if u get in my way/you gonna get courch to death/only my peeps respect me/i make the devil run away/ god fears me / if u mess with me / u are gonna mess with my crew/ my crew will fuck anyone up that messes with me/ i'll ripe people's hearts out/ feed them to my dog/ but before that/choke you to death unit ur thoart is black and blue/ripe ur neck off/piss down your thoart/ watch ur body decay/than go after ur family / make bullets hole through there chests/steal all there money/give the money to the poor/make u squell like a lil girl/if u don't i'll but a 40 ozzi to ta face/than blow your brains out/u fuck with me/u are gonna get fucked up
/\ Blah the structure is completly fucked on that fortunately u got time to improve but a serious structure change is needed i cant make out any of the rhyme schemes...IF there is any i cant see punches personals multies wordplay disses anything it looks like a big self glory verse bler 0/10 Sorry dawg i wasnt feelin it


Rascal

New to RB only personal i would need to get the Win..
tryin to diss me?
...well im gona knock you back like you was Gin..
/\ Nice opener

just 3 posts and stepping to a rep vet?
asked me to call you out...
but your custom text said "I haven't posted yet"..
/\ Ok punch i liked

your fucking wack. i mean who raps about guns still..
put a tablet in sum rice crispies...*
............................Just to say you popped a pill..
/\ Ha nice punch

I checked your life's history, endless chapters of misery..
Now repp your sig sayin..
"Just let me say Rascal just whored me, easily and officially"..
/\ Nice diss good flow

Broke down this hoecake, ok i give up with all the mocking
Your verse has got..
.................. jokes not punches and seriously....... im not joking..
/\ Nice closer u got this piss easy

V/Do i need to say...ok Rascal

RTF on this link...http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132981

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uppin this for more votes now..
Will hit links up..
im doing Mad Dogs now..
pz.

uppin ths for votes
plzzzz vote for me i know i sux but i just started
or u can vote for rascal

lmfaoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo arch and rascal....................wdf? u 2!!!!!
ha ha ha ha....
yo arch my stucture is so fucked but mayne....urs is worse which means a lot!!!!
nothing rhymed in ur verse...arch...please please please...work on that...prolly u still thinking of the killing and stuff dawg its kinna fading.....change style/personals

rascal..u damn vet.....your punches hit hard and the fact that ur verse rhymed couldnt miss...asin yeah u had tight rhymes...

the one i liked most was: "I checked your life's history, endless chapters of misery.."
cool i really felt that......and ur structure was betta...than your opponents...

v/ rascal...
drop an honest vote in 1 of my battles(links below)....

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uppin for some more votes..
pz.