10 lines
no hate votes
no crew votes
check in
and spit first
deadline 20 mins

aight checkin in im down blind spit u spit within 20 mins of me aight...

no dawg your spittin first because thats what I stated in the rules above look.

so you say you like freestylin and fucking girls and guys-
ill tell you how i know, because im your dad in disguise-
why did you agree to this battle, your gonna get ripped-
i know this guys biggest secret, he is nondescript-
"Scriptive come out victorious once again" as expected-
you don't wanna fuck wit me im socially connected-
four lines to go this guy can't take any more, he's dead-
make it look dramatic he's bin shot in a rose bed-
this is the last time this guys gonna be able to read-
this battle was easy it's a 5-0 win to me garenteed-

aight if i was l8 im sorry lol just don't disqualify mr... peace

so dat name is gay called somet weird called scripture/
your dat weirdo who masterbates over child pictures/
your rhymes are weekerning mine, yours just wine/
and I got no time for your week ass to shine/
i'll be gutting this little bitch wid a razor blade /
use the same blade I just shaved my ballz wid/ heh
im the biggest rhymer, and ders no one else finer/
you'll be an autograpgh signer paying me loadse dollers/
your nothing, just a nobody from machester city /
2 me your shitty and you might aswell focus on footy/

aight nice verse........ uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

upinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

upping this thread................................

comee on people vote on this shit...........

hmmm,,,,,,,,ok scriptive wins basically cos his rhymed...
there wasnt much init otherwise

enery a few of your lines didnt rhyme,,,...thats why u lost..
no hate but u need to work on that


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aight 1-0 me uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

aiyo this battle was pretty weak, both of ya cats need some work but my vote goes to Scriptive cuz i was feelin his punches mostly and his wordplay was aight.
Energy man I dont know what u think dawg, u cant rhyme at all....literally.
HAHA
u fucckin wack energy
vote: Scriptive

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ok dats 2-0 me uppin nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

upinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn this shit bitach