yo sup ready to battle
you spit first
5-14 lines
no d/r votes, no hate/crew votes
good luck and dont beg for votes

its ur first battle u expect beginners luck
well too bad nigga cuz i dont give a fuck
callin me out u must really think ur tough
ill have u sayin "pleez mishap dont be so rough"
dumb niggaz like u challenge the might of a god
unfortunate gives u lyriks cuz u ride on his rod
this nigga chose michigan cuz he gay
im the detroit emcee ur usin me as a play
ur crossin the line puttin my name in ya lyriks
my shit hits harder then mike tyson learn to fear it
u sat in that chair tryin to think of some rhymes
then in our turn u dareturn to me to give u some lines?
i heard harder rhymes then his comin from nelly
this nigaa challenged me but yet hes softer then jelly.......

drop yo shit alredy nigga ,,,...............................

yo heres mine

i looked at your record its embaracing 4 battles yet stil no win
Quit voting for yourself with DJ lightweight, cheating is a sin
just watch im goin to ko this hoe make his girls touch her toes
standing still while im throwing blows,elimintating all my foes
you keep tring to bring the heat, since your a bitch heres a doggie treat
this could be ur last heart beat, since its definetly not you last defeat
ur rhymz are fake to say the least, and mishap you think your a beast
watch were u step u might get greased, after this battle you be deciest
they all say im venomous like a snake when i spit i leave u delerious
mishap are you serious, the simplicity of lyrics are just hilariousss
let go of the baby rattle, its time for me to heard the cattle
jump off my saddle, i dont need ne more lines to win this battle

alright lets get some votes for this battles and close it out real quick

yo yo yo...aight let me say...mishap...uve been had youngblood...wen u gonna learn...dont get me wrong u had some goot flow, hits and shit...but yo this other cat...got u...his hits were direct at you...they didnt beat around the bush...as for u...u got kinda side tracked i think...not focused on ripping him...so my vote goes to dareturn...nice job homie....keep it up...holla

aight, neither one of yall was that good, but if i had to choose the best between you two it'd be mishap mainly because his structure was so much better than dareturn's. dare your structure was jacked up, next time try to shorten out your lines. you started off decent but you fell off pretty quickly so elevate in your next battle

my vote= mishap

yall return the favor here, dont vote against me just cuz i aint vote for you tho, that shit happens often

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134795

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yo vote up on this battle and well repay the favor by voting on yours drop and only honest votes

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DaReturn this line was hott ...you keep tring to bring the heat, since your a bitch heres a doggie treat
this could be ur last heart beat, since its definetly not you last defeat...
Word even though you only had one personal ur flo was def on and some metas were thrown in there too..good stuff

Mishap..just keep elevatin you gotta come up with good personals and metas iight man? other than that you had some good rhymes and pretty good flo but it doesnt cut it..sorry man.

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yo open lets keep this a movin will repay the favor once i get 20 posts

i must say dareturn ur not very good ill vote once i get 20 posts and explain

ok here goes


mishap/i liked how u talked alot about it bein his first time but that will only get u so far/i like the opener and some of the punches i like your ideaas to attack him with and u were overall OK nuthin spectacular


dareturn/good 1st try but u need to elavate u did have nice punches but i dont think u even had structure so keep tryin man

v/mishap

ok lets get some votes in this battle lets end it