Aight
10-15 linez
no bitin
no hate
no recyclin
ill spit 1st due by tomorrow at 12am aiight

Yo, you know you battlin someone gay when they got a name like Grenade,
on the other side of the computer makin love to his hand cuz he cant get laid,
dis aint no card game, and if it was im impossible to beat like a joker and a duce of spaids,

Dog, i can smell yo fear from here and if you scared theirs no way you can win,
Im a fuckin timed bomb and your a grenade....i jus pulled yo pin

An Yo, when my punches hit itz heavy like brikz hit you,
The devil in me will make jesus walk wit you,
You battlin me is like comparing an automatic to a pistol,
Ill amputate yo arm wit sickle, and pop a slug in ya leg cuz if ya wanna live ya better off crippled,

Waitin for dis Grenade to explode, but nuthin,
didnt know he was up against a weapon of mass destruction,

Ya shitz due tomorrow but youll still get no credit,
Cuz i know u gonna fuckin copy, paste and edit,
Have a nice day and umm FUCK YOU,..Yea i said it.

uppin 4 votez an lookin 4 a crew.

this guy can huff and puff...but he cant blow my house down..
spittin 3 lines to a bar..u know how wack that sounds?...

only claim he got ta be good is..he beat blue water,n he aint shit!
ha,that guys record more backwards than saying uve got wit!

your structures more fucked up than mortar-less bricks..
your punches touch softer than a pair of collogen lips!...

im fuckin you harder than the guy off pulp fiction..
only time u been "ill"..is when u go for a prescription!..

lemme tell ya dawg,my rhymes got wit..urs full of shit..
only time youve ever "cum hard",is watchin a porno flick!..

i leave u more blinded than stevie wonder in a maze...
jus like me n you...our records,are going seperate ways..


HONEST VOTES PLZ....N DROP YA LINKS

ok well first off it was very close. both good battles. but there has to be a winner so this is how it goes. wolf had sum good punches but like grenade said he was using 3 lines sumtimes wich just aint wit it. grenades was good and had good punches and structure but that cum hard line has been used so many times in so many different ways its just lame now. but i have to give it to grenade.

vote: grenade

grenade hit harder on this one... better personals n wordplay... structure wasnt fucked up either..

big bad wolf.. work on structure and flow.......... and punches... cos your lines were stretched as shit.. n ive seen all ya punches before, they played... n they were weak... get more personal

v/ grenade

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grenade took this battle, he had structure. the big bad wolf just had paragraphs , a few of grenades punches was aight but still was a weak battle

v - grenade

i vote grenade because his rhymes werent too long, the other one was borin and the structure sucked ass

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