structure - jae
flow - jae
personals - neida
metaz - neida
punchlines jae

vote jae

drop a vote on this link, make it fair n explained

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133370

0-1 me so far U.............P..........P.........I.........N

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"Take you out of the game like James Worthy.You ain't worthy.Observe me.I send shots through ya jersey."(Jae Hood)
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Structure? Oh my fuckin' God. No one can honestly say he has better structure. Fuckin' D/R's yo.

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Lyrics
One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud

^^^Yo why you beefing over the vote he voted fair i don't even know him so how he dick ridin but yea uppin

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"Take you out of the game like James Worthy.You ain't worthy.Observe me.I send shots through ya jersey."(Jae Hood)
<img src="http://img56.photobucket.com/albums/v172/taruncheelz/JaeBurnz354_copy.jpg">

You honestly gonna tell me you have better strucutre in this battle?

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Lyrics
One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud

I don't care bout structure no more i do me but i think i won nd u think u won but this is based on the voters opion duke

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"Take you out of the game like James Worthy.You ain't worthy.Observe me.I send shots through ya jersey."(Jae Hood)
<img src="http://img56.photobucket.com/albums/v172/taruncheelz/JaeBurnz354_copy.jpg">

this was an alright battle,
JB-i was feeling your verse more but your structure was way off,stretched lines made it not flow very good but your punches were better than darklight's,vocab was around the same..
Darklight:lost's of multi's but i did'nt feel any of your punches,structure n flow were good but you needed harder punches,overall JB'S was the better verse.

VOTE/JaeBURNS
please return the favour:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130025 skforty7
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134245 gunit
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134328 stank

U............p...................p..............i. ...........n

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"Take you out of the game like James Worthy.You ain't worthy.Observe me.I send shots through ya jersey."(Jae Hood)
<img src="http://img56.photobucket.com/albums/v172/taruncheelz/JaeBurnz354_copy.jpg">

Uppin

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Lyrics
One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud

Punchsark
Flow: Rae
Personals: None
Structure: Rae

Winner = Rae

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yeah yeah im ill!

my name is Jae Burnz man not Jae Burnz but it's ight did u vote??

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"Take you out of the game like James Worthy.You ain't worthy.Observe me.I send shots through ya jersey."(Jae Hood)
<img src="http://img56.photobucket.com/albums/v172/taruncheelz/JaeBurnz354_copy.jpg">

dam newbs dont know what the fuck their talkin about

structure - God
flow - God
personals - neither
metaz - neither
punchlines God

anyway god took this because his punches hit harder..
jae you punches didnt connect..or they were played or weak..

v/god

v/darklight..........my bad.......................

LOL.. mc.cM said flow and structure beat the fact that I had better punches... Votin' sucks here.

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Lyrics
One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud