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Old 07-19-04, 09:03 PM   #1
The Black Plague
... I Dont Hate...
I Speak The Truth
 
From: Detroit
The Black Plague vs. Golden Shellz

IP: 6BDC 19BA

10-15 lines
No d/r
No crew votes
No otha bullshit

Due in half an hour, you spit half hour after me...

Good luck...
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Old 07-19-04, 09:05 PM   #2
The Black Plague
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From: Detroit
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Check... I'll spit here pretty soon...
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Old 07-19-04, 09:06 PM   #3
Golden shellz
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From: Bed Stuy / Brooklyn
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checkin
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Old 07-19-04, 09:27 PM   #4
The Black Plague
... I Dont Hate...
I Speak The Truth
 
From: Detroit
IP: 6BDC 19BA

Yo lemme drop this fool fast, i'll leave his wack ass in my past
5-0 ko, blastin his raps, dint have to drop, already got him smashed
I shouldnt have checked the box "yes, i wanna slaughter this emcee"
Cuz by decidin to record it, i bumped up his his wack record to 2-3...
Which was unnecessary, the kids already gottin merked enuff already
Lost 2 then won 2, do i have to tell you he's extremely unsteady?
Read his other verses, the kids "full" of fillers like the taco bell menu*
Can't rhyme for shit, got no wordplay, flows off... Do i have to continue?
He's like 2 midgets "high" fivin each other, he just dont make sense
Like last months rent, his .500 record will soon be in the past tense
Says he's from " ina house nigga"... Dont that jus tell you he herbish?
You need help, so treat my verse like a museum...Stop and observe it

* on taco bells commercials, they say that their meals " make you full"... i know its kinda lame...
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Old 07-19-04, 10:45 PM   #5
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From: Bed Stuy / Brooklyn
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i know this nigga not talkin bout fast food menus
if this was ppv id murder this nigga on his own venue
look i see u like taco bells and they crunchy food
this nigga mistaked fuckin his mom for fuckin another dude
sorry to rain on ya parade but ya jus cant win
youll fuckin win this battle when ashanti learns how to sing
ill throw u in da lost and found by now its open
he says hes the black plague well tell god im the ill omen
u think u gonna make it happen my gunzll get to clappin
u better keep ya day job cuz this ya last battle in rappin
u must think u da shit sayin that u from hell
send u first class to dr.phil but i bet that wouldnt help
get da fuck out my face, ur wack a true disgrace
ill buy u for 3 dollars like a bootleg mixtape
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Old 07-20-04, 10:33 AM   #6
The Black Plague
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From: Detroit
IP: D351 2D62

You fed off my verse fag, thats what we call cheating, but w/e...

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Old 07-20-04, 11:48 AM   #7
Golden shellz
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so ya point is my fault den
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Old 07-20-04, 03:07 PM   #8
The Black Plague
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From: Detroit
IP: 5231 C967

Aight, its cool i guess...

Uppin
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Old 07-20-04, 08:36 PM   #9
Magic5
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From: Denver, CO
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The Black Plague
structure is pretty good...some of the lines seem stretched though...flow is nice...u had some tight multis...wordplay was pretty good...most of ur punches connected...decent personals...

Golden Shellz
structure is pretty nice...flow is good...u had no good multis...wordplay isnt very good...u fuckin fed...and ur other punches were wack...so none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
both had a pretty good structure...both had a good flow...The Black Plague had more, and better multis...better wordplay...more connecting punches...better personals...and he didnt feed...so basing off of that...he gets my vote....

VOTE - THE BLACK PLAGUE

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Old 07-20-04, 08:41 PM   #10
The Black Plague
... I Dont Hate...
I Speak The Truth
 
From: Detroit
IP: 8B19 7586

1-0, uppin again
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Old 07-20-04, 08:41 PM   #11
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Vote blak Plague

he had better punches , better flow and wordplay.

Golden had an alright verse just wasnt feelin it..

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136351


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Old 07-20-04, 09:47 PM   #12
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From: Cape Coma
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golden i can tell your a little better than when i fought you, but still its just the same old typical shit, you need to elevate more, get more original and get harder ass punches man, its ALL about the punches. black plague your verse was decent i like some of your punches especially that taco bell one, heh, my vote goes to you mos deff. and by the way ashanti actually doesnt sing half bad as far as the whole pop r&b thing goes..

vote- black plague

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Old 07-20-04, 09:50 PM   #13
Golden shellz
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den u musta not saw my battles den click on dem
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Old 07-21-04, 08:44 AM   #14
The Black Plague
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From: Detroit
IP: CC64 8DC0

I hate when i diss where a nigga's from, then he changes it. One man band did it, vishiss b did it, now he did it too...

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Old 07-21-04, 01:14 PM   #15
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both had a pretty good structure...both had a good flow...The Black Plague had more, and better multis...better wordplay...more connecting punches...better personals...and he didnt feed...so basing off of that...he gets my vote....

i would give this to black becuase his verse was overall better and thats all that is needed to be said

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