Scriptive took it with better punches. Some of Energys rhymes didnt rhyme. That was kinda his downfall cuz he only had 6 lines that did. Scriptive takes this with a simple structure and punches hit and actually rhymed.

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more than likely both of you could have done better but hey this is what we got so ill vote on this... scriptive all your rhymes rhymed so lets a point
energy you had lines that didnt rhyme but you had a (one) personal(or rhyme with dude name in it) so thats a point so .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ............................................
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scriptive win but energy work on the rhymes man
return the favor aight http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135995
~one xplicit

Scriptive's Drop:

so you say you like freestylin and fucking girls and guys-
ill tell you how i know, because im your dad in disguise-
hmm...what the hell??? weak 5/10
why did you agree to this battle, your gonna get ripped-
i know this guys biggest secret, he is nondescript-
weak once again no hard hitting punch 6/10
"Scriptive come out victorious once again" as expected-
you don't wanna fuck wit me im socially connected-
self-glorification is a no-no 5/10
four lines to go this guy can't take any more, he's dead-
make it look dramatic he's bin shot in a rose bed-
not feeling the concept and punch 4.5/10
this is the last time this guys gonna be able to read-
this battle was easy it's a 5-0 win to me garenteed-
2nd line self-glorification 5.5/10

overall: 6/10 (extra for syllable count/flow...)

ENERGY'S Drop:

so dat name is gay called somet weird called scripture/
your dat weirdo who masterbates over child pictures/
if hes a pedophile prove it okay...
very fake personal 4/10
your rhymes are weekerning mine, yours just wine/
and I got no time for your week ass to shine/
nope no complexity 3/10
i'll be gutting this little bitch wid a razor blade /
use the same blade I just shaved my ballz wid/
didn't rhyme at all and it was mainly
disgusting and unhumorous and killing them is played...4/10
im the biggest rhymer, and ders no one else finer/
you'll be an autograpgh signer paying me loadse dollers/
self-glorification both lines........4.5/10
your nothing, just a nobody from machester city /
2 me your shitty and you might aswell focus on footy/
didn't really rhyme and stating where
hes from does not make a very good personal sorry...3.5/10

overall: 3.8/10

vote: Scriptive

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lmao!!! Energy you're weak dude. Why don't u set up a battle for u and me. Come bring it to MaMa.

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Ya BiTch FA ShO!