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Old 07-22-04, 12:01 PM   #1
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a little freestye right HERE peep IT ,CHECK IT

PRETTY soon ure BOY CASS, will be heavy- with- fame,CAUSE I steadily- bring,hot rhymes, THATS better than "VETERANS-IN-THE-GAME,these cats IS NOT-NICE,in the spot-light,they HEAVILY-LAME, the game is ready -FOR-A-CHANGE, hot -lines, i got-rhymes,TO BE embedded-in-ure-BRAIN,these FAKE RAPPERS talk about how THEY HEAVY-WITH-KANE, or how they got A BEZZI-AND-CHAIN, how they SPIT-TEKS,AND HIT-SETS, when the DEZZI-GO-FLAME, /these LAMES -IS-PLENTY, only CHANGE they-bring-is-pennies, /i cant STAND listening -to- this- bullshit, IM POSITIONING with a FULL -CLIP,IM a MUSICIAN-WITH-GOOD-SPITS, i see THE TRADITION-when -niggas-IS SPITTING-hood shit,spitting THAT GUTTER SHIT, but LIVE-NONE-OF-IT, they NEED to give-up-on-it. I talk about REAL SHIT,THEY need to get UP-ON-IT,/ WHEN i spit IM GIVING-MY-HEART-TO-U, the tru genuine-article, IM -SPITTING-AND -MY-HEART-IS-TRU,NEVER HAVE to lie in my raps, im supplying-the-facts, WHILE I WATCH u LIARS ride-in-the-back, EVERYBODY is trying-to-stack, why-in-fact, CAUSE they NEED MONEY -TO-LIVE, its stunning-me-kid-, FOR MONEY rappers will talk about drugs,murder,etc, BUT NONE-OF-IT-THEY-DID, /just LIKE EVERYONE I WANT to come THRU-WITH-THE -WEALTH,but regardless ILL STAY -true- to -myself
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Old 07-22-04, 12:02 PM   #2
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can people read AND GIVE THERE OPINION, APPRECIATE IT
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Old 07-22-04, 01:11 PM   #3
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Commentz: It Would Be Easier To Read And Plus You'd Prolly Get More Replys If You Quit Highlighting Your Shit, By The - - - Between Multis Or Rhymes And The Words In Capitols And Shit, It Doesnt Make Your Verse Any Better Than It Is With It In There... It Was Ok, Try Not To Be Repetitive And Have To Much Like Content...
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PRETTY soon ure BOY CASS, will be heavy- with- fame,CAUSE I steadily- bring,hot rhymes, THATS better than "VETERANS-IN-THE-GAME,these cats IS NOT-NICE,in the spot-light,they HEAVILY-LAME, the game is ready -FOR-A-CHANGE, hot -lines, i got-rhymes,TO BE embedded-in-ure-BRAIN
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Try To Work On That For Now..

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