Max lines 20
blind spit
due saturday 12 noon
all rules must be followed
i'll spit when i can
so i suggest that u go ahead and spit first
im doing chores around the house (mowing the lawn) (Folding the clothes)
tommorow im going out to Key west for some fishing so i won't be able to spit then

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Guess who?...

...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

ckin in..my verse will b up b4 12 on sat.//////////

Checking in.... You better have your lines by Saturaday or friday or your D/Q. Also change the due date to friday 12 noon. I think its better since i'm going to post mines later. I want this over with.............

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Guess who?...

...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

This newbie accepted my challenge he knew he’d receive a loss.
My spits’ are “dangerously hot”, It’s like fucking Tabasco sauce.
Says he is a “manipulator”, be he can’t even manipulate his mind.
Can’t “light his mind”, even if he had the brain of Albert Einstein.
Fuck blowing this emcees fucking mind, its already brain farted.
I'll own this fucking cat, just like buying a pet in the supermarket.
I drop bombs, like if Japans city, Hiroshima was under attack again.
My rhymes are atomic, because it describes your wacky talent.
My lines are murderous, I’ll be the cause of this textcees downfall.
I mean this guy is pleading for battles, and yet he’ll be losing all.
I’ll “son” this guy harder than his dad sonned you as a small boy.
Bringing him?, Hell nah, I’ll lure this kid to “hell” with a dick decoy.
Once I punch you, On the other hand, He can’t ever take a stand.
Might as well watch Peter Pan, cause your punches Never-Land.

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Guess who?...

...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

?What???? this guy just signed on and i PMed him and 10 mins later Manipulation signs off without posting his verse he better post it at friday if not today but im hoping today so we can get it over with
....................WIERD....................

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Guess who?...

...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

no beef dawg......but r u retarded????????.u posted the rules..and as agreed my verse will be up by saturday 12 noon.
wtf r u goin on about?..................

hahaha n stop freeposting
peace

why this guy sweating me about posting my verse first?..
dawg u posted the rules..u retarded?...amnesia your curse?..
i see u reppin where you from..coz u talk like you from "down south"..
i know you slow..but thats your arse..dnt use it as your mouth!..
why you coming on here?..so u can "drop"?..unlike your balls...
"13" years old..you couldnt fuck wit me..even after puberty falls..
i seen your rhymes before..like,...in every one elses threads!..
most your punches been seen..way before biggie woz dead!..
tell u what BOY..your "sonned"..so you can call me your mother..
im about to make your style be "street"..by leaving u in the gutter!..

sorry this is ma real verse ..i only thought it was 10 lines..sorry

why this guy sweating me about posting my verse first?..
dawg u posted the rules..u retarded?...amnesia your curse?..
i see u reppin where you from..coz u talk like you from "down south"..
i know you slow..but thats your arse..dnt use it as your mouth!..
why you coming on here?..so u can "drop"?..unlike your balls...
"13" years old..you couldnt fuck wit me..even after puberty falls..
i seen your rhymes before..like,...in every one elses threads!..
most your punches been seen..way before biggie woz dead!..
tell u what BOY..your "sonned"..so you can call me your mother..
im about to make your style be "street"..by leaving u in the gutter!..
ima leave you clearly filed..easy to find..put u under lost n found..
ive seen more shit in your verse,than dropped in the dog-pound!..
think you made a big mistake..forgot to mention..i was a GIRL...
so your verse carrys less "weight"..than a fake diamonds n pearls!..

Haha nice verse but it took you that loong and i stated clearly no editing...
man good verse let the votes come in ...
nice personals...
ok i want votes in this battle cos i thought both of us were very good

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Guess who?...

...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

ha.....nah it took me like 30mins but i was bysy.woz b4 tha dead;ine anyway........

i wasnt editing..but it didnt state that in tha rules
i jus forgot it woz 20 lines not 10 thats all

uppin 4 honest votes antway

Close battle../

Lyrical Onslaught

This newbie accepted my challenge he knew he’d receive a loss.
My spits’ are “dangerously hot”, It’s like fucking Tabasco sauce.
(played...self-glor. = no)

Says he is a “manipulator”, be he can’t even manipulate his mind.
Can’t “light his mind”, even if he had the brain of Albert Einstein.
(not bad punch)

Fuck blowing this emcees fucking mind, its already brain farted.
I'll own this fucking cat, just like buying a pet in the supermarket.
(Decent, a little played)

I drop bombs, like if Japans city, Hiroshima was under attack again.
My rhymes are atomic, because it describes your wacky talent.
(not bad)

My lines are murderous, I’ll be the cause of this textcees downfall.
I mean this guy is pleading for battles, and yet he’ll be losing all.
(Not bad)

I’ll “son” this guy harder than his dad sonned you as a small boy.
Bringing him?, Hell nah, I’ll lure this kid to “hell” with a dick decoy.
(Not bad, second line was blah though)

Once I punch you, On the other hand, He can’t ever take a stand.
Might as well watch Peter Pan, cause your punches Never-Land.
(Decent closer...straight wordplay)

Manipulation

why this guy sweating me about posting my verse first?..
dawg u posted the rules..u retarded?...amnesia your curse?..
(not bad)

i see u reppin where you from..coz u talk like you from "down south"..
i know you slow..but thats your arse..dnt use it as your mouth!..
(okay)

why you coming on here?..so u can "drop"?..unlike your balls...
"13" years old..you couldnt fuck wit me..even after puberty falls..
(decent wordplay)

i seen your rhymes before..like,...in every one elses threads!..
most your punches been seen..way before biggie woz dead!..
(blah)

tell u what BOY..your "sonned"..so you can call me your mother..
im about to make your style be "street"..by leaving u in the gutter!..
(okay)

ima leave you clearly filed..easy to find..put u under lost n found..
ive seen more shit in your verse,than dropped in the dog-pound!..
(blah again)

think you made a big mistake..forgot to mention..i was a GIRL...
so your verse carrys less "weight"..than a fake diamonds n pearls!..
(seemed forced to rhyme)

V/LyricalOnslaught - more consistant punches, both were alright though.

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I'm Back... But I Don't Need One

Oh Yeah...

Drop you fucking verse Lyrical, I'm putting unlimited time as long as you actually drop.

Props to both, can you please hit up one of the battles in my sig.

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I'm Back... But I Don't Need One

iight man thanks i'll vote on your battle

Uppin 1 on tis battle we need some honest vote here
i promise to return the favor if you vote on any of my battles

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Guess who?...

...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

yep..tite battle this.uppin..
return tha favour......