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MURDA-GRAM 1 16.67%
amayze 5 83.33%
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Old 07-24-04, 04:50 AM   #16
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aiight gram had a weak opener, yoyo line was good. punch after that was good, closer was ok.. not many personals in the verse, needa work on that.. but it wasnt bad.

amayze, your opener was an alrite punch...2nd one used a bitta word play which was ok. overall there was a few decent punches n personals.. closer was a bit weak..

gram had a better verse second time round, it was some alrite shit.. nuthin amazin, but it was better then the first, punches all hit decent..

2nd verse from amayze was aiight.. punches worked, i understood what he was sayin.

im gonna give the vote 2 amayze, kid just came a bit harder then gram, more personals.. u both use // at the end of ya lines which is a bit pointless.. but fuck it..

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Old 07-24-04, 05:35 PM   #17
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thanx SIN 4 ur honetsy
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Old 07-26-04, 03:41 PM   #18
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gram whatever,your verse was straight ass,it was almost torture to sit through.amayze,you had an ok verse,just work on your structure.What the hell is with all these cats spitting 2 verses?anyways,gram,your wordplays need to hit stronger and your structure wasnt very original.amayze,i didnt like the way you typed everything in cap locks and had the //s at the end of your verse.But you had the upper hand and my vote goes to you.congratulations.
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Old 07-26-04, 03:47 PM   #19
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thanx 4 ya vote vote
4 sum of my other battles up top
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Old 07-26-04, 10:21 PM   #20
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this battle was lopsided from the get go

Murda
you had some nice punches but they were basic as hell, you need 2 elevate alot before ya next battle, you need to come with some more meta's and work on makein ya punches more personal

Amayze

You had some nice punches ya ya complexity was alot better than your comp you elevated alot from ya last battle that i saw you in, you some nice personals which is wha won the battle for u, had some good meta's 2

this was kinda one sided~~~~ murda you had a nice drop kid but elevate

my vote`~~~~~Amayze
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