Somthing quick

Hey Homey--Any Foe opposing thee better be kissing their Rosary,
Cuz Lyrically anything under God aint Folding me///
Facing Ice everyone knows there's no use of Competing,
I Got'cha own MIND asking "What Da hell Were You Thinking"///

Fuck ya wreckord bitch i got ya head spinnin you were murked from tyhe beginning

Bitch You Diss Me?? Ahhh... You too sweet, giving me a ToothAche,,
Creativity, wordplay, Drumil ya blue prints a fucking fake///
You dont believe in God..What?!?! You Saying ICE Dont Exist?
I'll remove ya Mouth and Throw ya Voice like a True Ventriloquist//
Your Style drenched in Fear and Embedded into your Conscience,
Beating Me is Twisted like Nuns fucking In Convents//

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i read some hot icepick battles but durmill got him this time his shit was on point and slick as hell this was a good battle but i give it to durmill plus ice ending was whacked



yall niggas vote on my battle with daillest and my shit with killa

IcePick:


Hey Homey--Any Foe opposing thee better be kissing their Rosary,
Cuz Lyrically anything under God aint Folding me///

ehh..okay opener..okay punch..

Facing Ice everyone knows there's no use of Competing,
I Got'cha own MIND asking "What Da hell Were You Thinking"///

okay personal and mult use...

Fuck ya wreckord bitch i got ya head spinnin you were murked from tyhe beginning

Bitch You Diss Me?? Ahhh... You too sweet, giving me a ToothAche,,
Creativity, wordplay, Drumil ya blue prints a fucking fake///

^Nice personal here..good punch..

You dont believe in God..What?!?! You Saying ICE Dont Exist?
I'll remove ya Mouth and Throw ya Voice like a True Ventriloquist//

^good personal and punch..and nice mult..use..

Your Style drenched in Fear and Embedded into your Conscience,
Beating Me is Twisted like Nuns fucking In Convents//

^Decent closer..good punch...

Durmil:

Amateur Stop! Ya Getin Dismanteled With Shots While Im Takin Ya Props
...Ice Pick The Word Is You Givin Out More Hand Jobs Then A Manicure Shop

^Nice..Punch and mult use..good opener.

The Rap Business Is Straight Hopeless, In The Industry You Won't Make It
....I'll Have Ya Body Pourin Out More Liquids Than A Generous Waitress

^Good mult use..okay punch here..

Look At Ya Basic Lines, Youll Never Shine....Goodluck Becomming A Vet
...Trying To Rhyme From the Heart? I'll Rip Out Your Torso & Spit In Ya Chest

^First line..good Personal..got lost a littile in the Second Line tho..

You Thinkin You Can Fuck Wit The BluePrint? Then Watch As I Nukka U Out
...Cuz If Ya Continue Spittin Pussy Your Gunna Find A Dick in Your Mouth

^Nice..wordplay here..and good Punch/personal..aswell..

Stupid Little Bitch! I Guess You Underestimated My Ability To Rip Kids
...Here's Some Free Advice: Work On Pickin Up Ya 'Game' Like 'G-Unit' Did!

^Nice closer..and Good Mult Use..and okay Punch/personal...

My Vote: DurMil

Was just more consistant and came a little bit harder with his punchess
and personals..good battle tho

uppin vote up and leave links........

les battle durmil, ill vote later.

Yah not bad considering you took an hour after i did and it was suppose to be like 20 minutes

Uppn for votes

Next time be a lil quicker on the shit homey

if i took over an hour instead of 20 minutes i would have ripped you up

Face to face you would get ripped there isnt an hour to spit ya stuff

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^^^????

i went offline and ate breakfest came back on and dropped haha wow herb...

uppin this

uppin this....

i gotta give this battle to durmil the handjob line just closed the battle that shit was sick. and icepick r u gonna upp for votes for out battle or what??????
v=durmilhttp://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136648
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136650
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136408

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Open Mic's

Lick Shots=Hitchcock feat Paul Cain and The Sick One
Opposite of Cold= The Cartel
Dear Others=Hitchcock
Kill That Static=Hitchcock

Ice Pick
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its mad newbish...structure was good...flow was on target...u had tight multis...wordplay was pretty nice...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Durmil
structure is good...flow is on target...a few multis...wordplay was good...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
Ice Pick had more multis...both had a good structure...both had a good flow...neither had good personals...Durmil had better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...Durmil gets my vote...

VOTE - DURMIL

PLEAE return the favor with an honest vote on the first link in my sig, against hotshh!...thanx...

ight uppin...leave ya links

wordplay- Durmil < this is wat won the battle
punches- Durmil jsut hit harder...
personals- none
creativity.. prolly Durmill....

this wasn't as one sided as it looks but it was a win by Durmill..

Ice pick ur nice but try to be a lil more original... and innovative with your punches.... good job though no hat'n.....

V/ Durmil

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1443343

Link^
return the favor and vote on this Punch line battle vs/ da truth....

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