nah man i dont think state would bite... and that kinda stuffs used in pretty much every verse against me... uppin

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DROP A VOTE ON THIS BATTLE AND I'LL BE SURE TO DROP ONE ON THIS RITE AFTER U VOTE ON MINE PC http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135130

lol not even i wuldnt even bite...especially someone im better then..thaz stupid..and One mand is that pics of u with the fro?

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nah nah... just a buddy that helps me mix n edit.. hes wearin one of my t-shirts though.. haha..

man dont just go round sayin you better than people, its pretty fucked... no hate but just lettin ya know

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uppin for votes.... cmon..........................

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uppin... vote honestly... no d/r..................

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ok state good drop alot of personals like the 3rd bar but your opener was super weak.9th and last line aint rhyme and your flow was good basically the same as mans flow.man good opener and good wordplay on the second bar.4th line was a hard hitting personal and 8th line 'biting ya verse'lol.so band wins with better punches and harder personals.

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AIN'T THAT THE PURPOSE OF THE SITE?

uppin this shit....

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ok now.. omg and state you both know ya'll my niggas.. so there shoul dbe no question bout this bing a hate vote.. dick ryding vote or nething like that..



state: your verse wasent the hottest i seen from you fam.. iv seen you rip cats like poor peoples tee shirts.. this just gave him paper cuts.. you had iight lines in there..
Band's Lines are Cold, I thought You'd be used to the cali weather by now.. (profile)
You Garbage Pal, The Trash Multi's You Spit Got Me wondering, HOW?!?..
^prolly one of your best lines... id give this verse like a 5.9-6.1/10 cant deside.. wasent uo to your stadards....


omb: thats structure withthe devided paragraphs and hyphens gotta go.. but what you were spittin was pretty hard ish.. my fav lines:
This battles a one sided gamble.. no ones even viewin-ya-bet..
an old name like "killah bwoy".. how u gon win if u aint reach puberty-yet?..
I'll Slay-n-kill-ya. punches, flow, whatever, my whole game-is-iller..
forget about ya lines, rhymes n verses.. cos shit, even ya name-is-filler..

Rappin-complex, clappin-wit-techs, spray packets-a-threats.. follow-that..
heres a tip: why not treat it like the vets dicks you suck, n swallow-rap..

theres more..i thought this verse was pretty damn hott.. out of 10, that shit waslike a 7.9.. flow was on point.. punches were hittin.. ery thing was there cept that busted ass structure nigga.. off that ish foreal..

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I gotta give statethis vote.....his verse was just ovarall better..this was a hott battler..on man band...u had some killler multies..but the punches slacked a littel bit...u could have done it a little better...but....state i liked ur struc....wordplay,punchlines ....personals.......nice overall battle..one man band..next time make ur struc all in 1 i know u was trying ot make it look neat but it kinda threw me off to keep taking breaths when tryiing to flow ur rhyme...but ur shit was hott but i do not think it was hott enough to win..nice drop both of ya!!!!

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Intelligence, 0, I mean, kid thought David and Galiath was a fairy tale..(sig)
Only Time You spittin' sick is when your openin' my sent mail..(ANTHRAX)
weak opener
Stated Himself One-Man-Band 'Cause no crew would accept His Wackness..
And Your Flow is Horrid, Only time you show emotion is when your auditioning for an actress..(sig)
just saw a similar line in another battle about 5 minutes ago...filler
Band's Lines are Cold, I thought You'd be used to the cali weather by now.. (profile)
You Garbage Pal, The Trash Multi's You Spit Got Me wondering, HOW?!?..
no real punch.. ok line but not for a battle
Kid Already Said it himself "No Dickriders!", Guess the outcome in this battle won't be hard to decide..
one-man? X-man? no, claims he spits "beast"ly, but his own Monsterous Lines Will Leave him Petrified..
easily ya best line... stick with this kinda shyt
Mad Cuz No One Returns the votes on his battles, No band, not everyones a dickrider like you..
Spit Ty-phoon's, Your still on elevation level One, Rappin' With baboons..
trash line...already called him a dick-rider...find another idea
Sit tight dont worry, you won't know what hit 'cha..
dont worry fam......i took a picta..
weak closer and structure of last line was fucked... 5/10


yo ill rip ya curses-n-all, read em, and ya rhymes never-have-shook-me..
drop'd 50 verses-or-more, heard-it-before, kid u just a veteran-rookie..
cool opener... not an OH SHYT line but fairly decent
How noobs-this-kid be, Just like his sig, ill black, blue n bruise-him-swiftly..
get a new-name-quickly, "CapiTol"? howbout "how-to-use-the-shift-key"..
nice multi's but not a hard hit at all

Fuck ya raps, instead Ill straight slay ya middle-ribs-n-head-bitch..
Im not riddled-from-ya-record, i know you only eat little-kids-for-breakfast..
was ok... coulda hit harder
sorry bout this, but i got to be dope, otherwise this fight-'ll-be-worse..
Cos if i come wack, all the voters might think i was biting-ya-verse..
nice punch here... picking up steam now!

This battles a one sided gamble.. no ones even viewin-ya-bet..
an old name like "killah bwoy".. how u gon win if u aint reach puberty-yet?..
I'll Slay-n-kill-ya. punches, flow, whatever, my whole game-is-iller..
forget about ya lines, rhymes n verses.. cos shit, even ya name-is-filler..
WHOA! these 4 lines were brutal! nice shyt right there

Rappin-complex, clappin-wit-techs, spray packets-a-threats.. follow-that..
heres a tip: why not treat it like the vets dicks you suck, n swallow-rap..
lmao at the closer...good shyt O 7.5/10 and that's only cuz i seen you spit way harder!