uppin lol

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lol~vote goes to j troop hands down for better punches better flow better structure~~he had da personals wit cha name and shit...

vote j trooper

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Im the best kid, get It in Perspective swing on u till i knock out ya best Senses
send 3..' 5.. ' 4.. bullets thru ya Chest that'll put you in Texas's Rememberance

~i liked this......had a personal here wit da 354...

Ya Sufficiency would never Compete wit me these "3" pistols? Ya Fool
Mix and Flip.. ya insides into "Skittles" bulletz hit you taller than Ja-Rule

~didnt really understand da last part of da 2nd line~~i know wha u was sayin but it could have been worded deffierent.

Look Ghost... lettin them "three five fo" bitches Justify and Critique ya Approach
i see now u Sensitive i notice'd ya Ignorance like Advil i stay down ya bitch Throat

~think this is funny...had me laughin...nice punch addin his bitch in it..

Im the best discovery since Penicilin sent to fix the "Sick-Less" Come Dare Me
Im Established.. you not Lavish.. Ghost catch more back shots than Halle Berry

~lol...good even tho halle berry and ghost should not b n da same sentence

Rb's Most.. Deadlist... Possession... Equipped with Lyrical Def Defying Pedigrees
Im Biligerant with a 7th Sense im usein u by lettin off my seeds on ya Baby Seat

~i think dis is the nicest line in your verse..complex..vocab..and still had they sylabels matchin...

NOW THE OTHER GUY
i wont need a master splinta to send out some shells...
how u exspect to flow when u was offbeat doin karaoke to jingle bells

~dont know what jingle bells has to do with a rap battle..but had good lenths

dis dude stay online for like 3DAYS STRAIGHT...
bags under his eyes..in socks and sweats talking bout “EBAY’S GREAT”(LMAO)

~could have came a lil harder but it was a nice line

now i'm postin J Troop on milk cartonz like vitamin D...
you like Tysons trainer you just warm-up the Mic for me realisticly

~funny line..nice punch..wit da milk carton and everything

i see ya verse an think u must be stoned like Jesus...
an ya gunz nobdy ever seen'em blow like breezes u still a fetus

~wordplay wit da "stoned"

you only get balls over the net an not when u play tennis...
i'll bl0w his brains in his hands and say HOLD DAT thought u diminished

~didnt really feel this line..could have came harder

overall vote...J Trooper

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J trooper: man you realy have a good verse, punches were better, wordplay and the personals were better j trooper has an overall better verse


Ghost: naw some lines were good, but the punches were kinda weak,ok personals butr not good enough

V goes to Ktrooper for an overall better verse

please J Trooper and Ghost retrun the favore by voting in my battles
i only need one more vote on this
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137238 kintaro vs me
please vote

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Guess who?...

...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

J_Trooper
structure was ok...ur lines were stretched though...flow fell off a little due to the stretchnes...u had tight multis...wordplay was also tight...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Ghost354
structure is alright...u werent very consistent with ur line lengths though...flow fell off a little due to the lack of consistency...u had some multis...wordplay was decent...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
both had an ok structure...both flows' fell off a little...neither had any punches connecting...neither had good personals...J_Trooper had more, and better multis..as well as better wordplay...so basing off of that...J_Trooper gets my vote..

VOTE - J_TROOPER

PLEAE return the favor with an honest vote on the first link in my sig, against hotshh!...thanx...

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vote on da prodigy vs troubledinocense an i'll return the favor

troop took dis simply cuz his rhymes hit harder beta punches even tho ghost had some iight metas.

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