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View Poll Results: Who Won Dis Muphucka?
Re$TricTed 5 62.50%
:.anxiety.: 3 37.50%
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Old 07-29-04, 01:01 AM   #16
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Elipses? What... You mean... dont put three periods after everthing...
 
Old 07-29-04, 02:46 AM   #17
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Anxiety's Drop:


R was up in the awards thread, only saying his own name like Pikachu...
But from the opinions other vets have, seems no one agrees with you...

- You should have maybe posted a link or somthing just so there is not confusion, just a suggestion this was a funny ass opener
8/10

Cant Impersonate the Impersonator? Restricted lately has been angry...
Since you failed to Impersonate, seems the impersonators Slim Shady...

-This had nice wordplay, but the punch seemed a little distant,
7/10

Your tellin people that saying you lost to DR votes is a whack excuse...
Refresh my memory, but isnt that what u said when you lost to looch...

This bar is a nice personal, and a consistent punch, nothing overly surprising just a straight up punch.
6.5/10

You were once considerd the best, no one here could take you down...
Now when people put u at the top, cant explain how sad that sounds...

-This was one of my favorite just cause it's a very creative personal,
8/10

Interesting how u offered to make a poll to get you out of phase one...
And after a few of our members bitched at you, you never made one...

This was a strong closer, and a deadly personal no question why I'm give'n this bar a
9/10

OVERALL: 38.5/50 This was a tight knit verse the personal's were hitting hard, you could tell there was some static getting brought to the surface.


Re$tricted's Drop:


Changed Ya Name..You're Signed In..But What You Trying To Prove?
Cause You Was Getting Disresepcted Back When I Was A Newb...

-Nice punch, this I thought started a little slow, you seemed to really build off each bar after this, I didn't see a lot of your creativity comming through on this bar,
7/10

This Dude Was Meant To Be Sonned Since Birth..Ya Mom Bothered and Wild..
I Would've Had My Child Aborted Before I Ever Fathered Your Style..

-Nice wordplay this really enhanced the punch, and creativty was there as well
7.5/10

By The Way You Ducking..It's Obvious You Need Protection..
Cause The Illest You Ever Got Was Coppin A Yeast Infection..

The first bar was kinda plain, and second finished the punch off, okay,, probably average,
7/10

Watch The Pixels Scream As I Make Your System Bleed Glitches..
I Hope Your Pussy's Trimmed And Clean..Cauase I Tend To Eat Bitches..

- I like the wordplay on this bar, it seemed to enhance the flow which as you are aware, tends to make the punch hit harder,
8/10

Your Bitten Pre-Write's Are Ripped With Vicious Heartlessness..
Sorry Kid but You're About As Live As Abortion Clinic Garbage Is..

-Damn, ya dont make it easy this was just as good as his finsher, when you come this fresh it's easy to see why ya get a 9 on this bar.

Let me add this up...

37.5/50

Damn, I hate it when they end up that close I think it makes the loss tougher to take, maybe it's just me but it's a pretty good example of just how close this battle was haven't seen the voting yet but I bet this one is gonna go down to the wire, it was just to close to call.


Vote removed.. both add up to 38.5
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Old 07-29-04, 02:56 AM   #18
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Anxiety - Nice verses....you had some good punches in there and ya structure was on point...easy to read all tha way through...the impersonator punche was good and ur closer his...overall a nice drop...8/10

Restricted - Real nice drop on ur part also.....good structure...your best punch was tha one bout eatin bitches......impressive work there.....but i'm goin wit anxiety....you both had hard hitten punches but he had more....hot drop....7.7/10

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Old 07-29-04, 09:25 AM   #19
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Aiyo Divinci....

How Da Hell YOu Gonna Vote But Not Even Add The Tallies Up Right...

My Score Equalled Up To 38.5....LMAO....

So You Need To Edit Ya Vote On Da Poles Or Whichever...

I'll Just Have It Removed Myself..

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Old 07-29-04, 10:07 AM   #20
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yea, this was a real dope battle here. I agree, it is one of the best on this site so far.

Anxiety, dope drop, man. You had some nice sick punches. Some hti hard, but some didn't hit hard too. But overall you did a tight job in this category. For your flow, it was pretty tight man. I don't think it ever went off. Tight shit. But you didn't really have that many personals. But overall, you still had a sick ass verse. I give you a 9/10

R-Rated, dope drop to you too. You also had dope punches. But I feel yours hit way harder than his. And you really had none that hit weak. You did a tight ass job here. Your flow was sick too. It didn't go off either. But damn, this was a hotv ersee. 9.5/10

v/R no hate. sick ass battle
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Old 07-29-04, 11:26 AM   #21
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yea, this was a real dope battle here. I agree, it is one of the best on this site so far.

Anxiety, dope drop, man. You had some nice sick punches. Some hti hard, but some didn't hit hard too. But overall you did a tight job in this category. For your flow, it was pretty tight man. I don't think it ever went off. Tight shit. But you didn't really have that many personals. But overall, you still had a sick ass verse. I give you a 9/10

R-Rated, dope drop to you too. You also had dope punches. But I feel yours hit way harder than his. And you really had none that hit weak. You did a tight ass job here. Your flow was sick too. It didn't go off either. But damn, this was a hotv ersee. 9.5/10

v/R no hate. sick ass battle


Lol... I had a personal every bar homie... Its straight though... Lets get some more votes... And... Feel free to nominate this shit ...
 
Old 07-29-04, 01:06 PM   #22
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I gotta think R won this battle i think his multies and wordplay wasgood in this verse..it was not as strong as he normally comes but ti was enough to win....anxiety ur verse was good but i think it slacked wit a few of the punches....Re$ had some good Punches and....but had no personals but i think the puncheslines picked up with them......an u need to work on doing the personals and wording...a littel better....but nice battle though
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Old 07-29-04, 02:19 PM   #23
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R was up in the awards thread, only saying his own name like Pikachu...
But from the opinions other vets have, seems no one agrees with you...
ok opener i wasnt feelin the pikachu part 7/10
Cant Impersonate the Impersonator? Restricted lately has been angry...
Since you failed to Impersonate, seems the impersonators Slim Shady...
ok ive never seen this a link would b nice ok very good punch if its true? 7/10
Your tellin people that saying you lost to DR votes is a whack excuse...
Refresh my memory, but isnt that what u said when you lost to looch...
nice personal dawg thats better 9.5/10
You were once considerd the best, no one here could take you down...
Now when people put u at the top, cant explain how sad that sounds...
kinda basic pretty good punch 8/10
Interesting how u offered to make a poll to get you out of phase one...
And after a few of our members bitched at you, you never made one...
he made it didnt he? 8/10
flow no flaws 10/10
complexity 8/10 wasnt the average verse u c around here lol but there were a few lines that were pretty basic
u had great personals id like 2 c work on multis
57.5/70

Changed Ya Name..You're Signed In..But What You Trying To Prove?
Cause You Was Getting Disresepcted Back When I Was A Newb..
good personal a did get disrespected cause he liked to talk shit lol 8/10
This Dude Was Meant To Be Sonned Since Birth..Ya Mom Bothered and Wild..
I Would've Had My Child Aborted Before I Ever Fathered Your Style..
tight punch 8/10
By The Way You Ducking..It's Obvious You Need Protection..
Cause The Illest You Ever Got Was Coppin A Yeast Infection..
that was hella funny dawg lmao 9/10
Watch The Pixels Scream As I Make Your System Bleed Glitches..
I Hope Your Pussy's Trimmed And Clean..Cauase I Tend To Eat Bitches..
lmao 9/10
Your Bitten Pre-Write's Are Ripped With Vicious Heartlessness..
Sorry Kid but You're About As Live As Abortion Clinic Garbage Is..
1 again funny 9/10
flow good 10/10
complexity 8.5/10 seen better from u
u need more personals and multis
64/70

so im given it to r no disrespect cause ur both my bois anxiety ive seen much improvement by u nice verse
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