U thinkin tha world revolves around u
cuz u can get a guy 2 do thingz i wouldnt do

but u steady wanna be wit me and think im gonna say yes
u need 2 realize that im not tha one 2 put 2 tha test

now u think that ur all that and that ur tha shit
what u dont really kno is that ur being called a bitch

a slut, hoe, whore, dyke, even a lesbian
but i forgot that u steady believe that there ur friendz

and then u wanna ask why we never spend time
is it because of what i say in my rhymes

is it because i catch u wit another guy everytime
so dont try 2 play me cuz this love aint blind

recognize a good man cuz this one is thru wit ur shit
go find another muthafucka 2 fuck wit

u think u slick but think again i got u all figured out
jus remember these words that come out my mouth

dont try 2 play me cuz u wont win this game
im tha champ in this confrontation so remember tha name
~D.S.G.B~

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[COLOR=DarkGreen]Tha 617 King

Not bad rhyme scheme - kinda simple like mine, and this seemed kinda "Young" no diss or anything - obviously you can rhyme, and a few lines came real nice, but there is some elevation that needs to come with depth/word play/ and some serious writing tricks. Structure was straight though. Hope to see more.

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