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Old 08-05-04, 08:04 AM   #1
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plz rate this people!

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THis is my sig
and this is for you,you fucking pig
YOu got no motherfucking mechanism brain
It is experiencing difficulties in the rain
you rap so hard cuz u want to keep up your fame
but all your raps and rhymes are just so fucking lame
You claim to be a damn motherfucking good mc
but the truth is you are still yet to learn your ABC!
You look so sad now i bet u gonna breadown and cry
Come on there...wake up now you small fxry!
wat u looknig at?u gonna report it to your mother fucking mama?
like it or not she is getting fucked now by your papa!
owh tehre this is the imcomplete lyric.
when i complete it you are trelli gonna get it!
so end here...ure safe
better run away and hide yourself now in a cave
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Old 08-05-04, 08:08 AM   #2
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or dis
shut the fuck up man jus shut the fuck up!
you better put up or shut the fuck up
your are messign with the master of rhyme
battling me is just gonna waste your fucknig time
you see the world is in disorder
even a theive can be your own moterfucking father
YOu are a motherfucking bitch
and just yesterday i heard u just got ditch
Come on now man pull the gun trigger
u want to show me that ur the real nigger?
come on man...use your brains...go figure!
rap master rhymes gate is just rite over here
you want to fucking masturbate ?
where?in front of your ganny's house gate?
u got any brains boy?
people is treating you like a toy!
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Old 08-05-04, 08:09 AM   #3
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2/10
Spellin mistakes.. stretched lines, lines that made no sence, lines that didnt rhyme..

no beef man, but u needa elevate a lot.. hit up the cyphers..
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Old 08-05-04, 10:50 AM   #4
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what he said^ plus to much motherfuckin's
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Old 08-05-04, 12:14 PM   #5
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Sorry Juss Elevate More
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Old 08-05-04, 07:18 PM   #6
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^agreed with all^
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Old 08-05-04, 08:03 PM   #7
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Same
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Old 08-05-04, 10:32 PM   #8
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u get a fuckin 0 from me cause lets see it was wack and it was wack and it was wack plue i dont like you pc
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Old 08-07-04, 05:23 AM   #9
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ok thx for the critics gu y iwill try to iprove
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Old 08-07-04, 05:29 AM   #10
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not that good
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Old 08-07-04, 05:33 AM   #11
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yeah not that good
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Old 08-07-04, 02:10 PM   #12
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y dont u post this is open mic????? u should try it i bet ull get a few feedbacks lmao dont clog up the forums with this crap and dont sig that lmao
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Old 08-07-04, 11:49 PM   #13
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i'd give it a 3/10
It was pretty wack man, spellin messed up.
Some stuff didn't rhyme or make sense.
U needs to elevate a lil' bit bruh.
U'll be makin progress tho
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Old 08-08-04, 05:46 AM   #14
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k thx bros
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Old 08-08-04, 05:49 AM   #15
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-0.35678249285/10
u suck... hit up cypher.
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