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calamity 3 37.50%
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Old 08-06-04, 09:52 AM   #16
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Old 08-07-04, 01:03 PM   #17
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Old 08-08-04, 11:42 PM   #18
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upping.. w o r d.....
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Old 08-09-04, 09:27 PM   #19
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vote fuckers...
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Old 08-10-04, 01:06 PM   #20
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I was gonna vote but true gangsters dont check the post count before they break the whole battle down bar-by-bar. I guess I'm just too thuggish...

bleh...didnt want to waste it heres my two cents

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Originally Posted by L.I.
Its sad to stoop down to his level as im easily rattlin this dude...
I mean.. I'm losing respect from everyone just for battling you...
->>ha ive seen it before but i like it

Blinded when calamity enters cuz they say wackness glows…
I guess he was tryin to hint something with the name he chose...
->>haha

Hes the shit man, nah im only kiddin, but no need for hostility...
The quote in his sig really demostrates his lyrical abilities...lmao
->>theres no quote in his sig anymore...

Man i've dissed enough, its time to be nice and give compliments to the star...
Called him a piece of shit and you smiled...
.........................cause thats double what you are...
->>haha nice closer

->>you didnt go way out of the box with this one but it was cool it made me laugh...nice closer and pretty good punches in here


[quote=Calamity]
L.I. i can see you dont get Rydes,cause you flaunted what you dont get in ya sig..
this nigga said he was Leaving But he didnt get far like a thrown twig..
->>ehh...thrown twig?

how is this dude callin' me dumb, when he can't even spell Crime..
scratch that.. how do you lose with someone elses rhymes?? ..
->>hah nice

its really humorous, when you losin' shit to a Dollar Bil ..
your skill level is more like a c -... i mean minus skill..
->>decent...

Notice everylines shorter,and gets less attractive..
I'd prolly like you better if u HAD stayed Unactive..
->>so-so closer

->>calamity I've seen some nice shit from you...this battle didnt really do it for me. Your punches didnt really connect except the one in the second bar. It was decent but not enough for the win here.


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Old 08-14-04, 08:38 AM   #21
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damm shit really gettin slept on..on dis shit....aneway umm cal takes dis easy with da personals plus da links...li u had madd personals 2 but ya first bar barley ryhmed u forced dat shit maddhard...i cant see nobody sigs cuzz of dis new battle system shit...both of u didn't have no punchlines,nothin real creative dis was just a personal battle aint nothin wrong with it but if ur not blind u'll see dat cal took dis shit...

hit up dem joints in my sig...n im not a hater li so dont give me dat hate vote shit
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Old 08-14-04, 09:33 AM   #22
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lmao...ery battle im in u vote against me kid...its obvious u dont no how to vote....but really i dont care...up
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Old 08-14-04, 11:53 AM   #23
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shut da fukk up...u voted in a few of my battles 2 so whut is u sayin n i dont know how da vote?? cuzz i aint vote 4 u...dogg i battle in da streets u just battle on here u cant tell me shit... u uppin ya shit amdd time's sayin vote fuker's so i fukkin voted
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Old 08-14-04, 01:30 PM   #24
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i said i dont care...u obviously dont understand punches...its ok...ur just not elevated enough...i forgive you!
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Old 08-14-04, 02:10 PM   #25
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L.I. i can see you dont get Rydes,cause you flaunted what you dont get in ya sig..
this nigga said he was Leaving But he didnt get far like a thrown twig..
decent
how is this dude callin' me dumb, when he can't even spell Crime..
scratch that.. how do you lose with someone elses rhymes?? ..
not sure what the 2nd meant like if he bit or something
its really humorous, when you losin' shit to a Dollar Bil ..
your skill level is more like a c -... i mean minus skill..
2nd is tight
Notice everylines shorter,and gets less attractive..
I'd prolly like you better if u HAD stayed Unactive..
decent didnt hit hard though

Its sad to stoop down to his level as im easily rattlin this dude...
I mean.. I'm losing respect from everyone just for battling you...
nice but not personal
Blinded when calamity enters cuz they say wackness glows…
I guess he was tryin to hint something with the name he chose...
1st part is decent
Hes the shit man, nah im only kiddin, but no need for hostility...
The quote in his sig really demostrates his lyrical abilities...lmao
LMAO this was a tight line
Man i've dissed enough, its time to be nice and give compliments to the star...
Called him a piece of shit and you smiled...
.........................cause thats double what you are...
blah didnt hit hard

I gotta go with L.I for more wittier punches
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Old 08-14-04, 08:58 PM   #26
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ok calamity that was not your best verse at all but it had some nice punchlines bad stucture but a nice flow when i caught it good personals and punches puled you along5/10
li good flow real good flow and structure helped good wordplay but no real punches that hit or good disses kinda like some mase shit all flow nocontent no hate but i expected more from a nigga with as many wins as you4/10
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Old 08-15-04, 03:10 AM   #27
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Quote:
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i said i dont care...u obviously dont understand punches...its ok...ur just not elevated enough...i forgive you!


huh?? put a "E" at da end of ur name cuzz ur a lie man...i called u out 4 a punchline battle u said no cuzz nun of ur friends couldn't vote
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Old 08-18-04, 09:02 PM   #28
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Old 08-19-04, 03:26 AM   #29
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Old 08-19-04, 05:31 AM   #30
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Voted For: calamity

In my opinion, Calamity takes this one. All of his lines were hard personals/punches. Good shit. Even structure too. LIs verse was kinda basic, and I wasnt really feelin the punches. Calamity wins this with an all around more complex verse.

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