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0 | 0% |
Ice Pick |
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5 | 100.00% |
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This was feedback posted for Ice Pick
IP: EFDF 488F
hey uhhh.... fatlip.... you reading this?... come closer... a lil closer... you see this real good now, right? DON'T EVER TYPE NO SHYT LIKE THAT EVER AGAIN IN THIS SITE!!! This is a battle not a 1979 Kurtis Blow lip syncing contest. I wasn't really impressed by ice pick's verse...until I read yours... you are supposed to rag on ya opponent... diss him... shyt on his name, his game, whatever...anything but what you just did.
wwwweeell im a disaster a microphone master put on the tape ill rock u ghetto blaster... what the fuck, chuck!!! LMAO/ROTFL/CTFU Ice... you got this hands down... just off the strength that you actually went at ya opponent... you had a few punches... ya lines were stretched all over the place... added a few multi's... work on ya word play and word usage... v/ice pick... funny ass battle...i gonna put this line in my sig: wwwweeell im a disaster a microphone master put on the tape ill rock u ghetto blaster CTFU!!! *don't have enough posts...sorry ice pick* |
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GoD LiKe
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IP: A23B D5BB
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AY ice i voted but forgot tha link
Vote on dis http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140697 or dis http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140636 |
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GoD LiKe
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IP: 4DB9 B918
uppin..and vote honestly....drop links will return the favor....
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GoD LiKe
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uppin..and vote honestly....drop links will return the favor....
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GoD LiKe
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uppin...will return the favor....drop links.......
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GoD LiKe
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uppin..and vote honestly....drop links will return the favor....
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IP: E198 D20B
Voted For: Ice Pick
Structure - fatlip, damn ice pick! work on your stucture a little cuz, you have stretched lines every where.. Flow - , i mean, it's hard to differentiate, they were a tie.. wordplay.. ice pick got the wordplay because his rhyme scheme wasn't all that basic as fatlips was.. punches - Ice Pick, he atleast had some, fatlip didn't have any.. opener - Ice Pick came a little harder.. closer - I didn't get fatlips, so i'll give it to Ice Pick overall ice pick has more experience and it shows.. tho he lacked stucture he had punches and wordplay that kinda ate fatip, so my vote goes to you ice pick.. 1 return favor with a drop in my battle too plz.. thanx, here it is.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141553 |
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GoD LiKe
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the medicine man
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Voted For: Ice Pick
massacre massarcre this nigga got murked yo thats like throwing a lamb to a lion this nigga devoured em, fatlip caught a fatlip!!!! yo im next fa u fatlip i need a win! nah seriously if thats ya 1st battle damn talk about a lesson better now than latter though every category to ice vote honest my shit is self explained http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=141579 |
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