Yo ... As I sit back relax and close my eyes
Zonin' of the smoke a strawberries I realize
That what really gives me the will to survive
Is the people who to this day still do arrive
To be their in the deepest a any a ya times
Whether it's for dimes or the any otha crimes
It doesn't really matter as long as they're their
Everyone need proper care cauze yes we're
All human imagine always bein' in hospitals
Visitin' family lookin' ... seein' grin obstacles
That would later shape ya life the lonely wife
By right I would die by her with my only life
And she's married to GOD yes ma ma dukes
Is one never disowned her son she troops
After all she been threw her other son too
Almost dealt what she did one times two
More when I was going on visits much more
I Saw things with young eyes in such gore
People with sliced arms and scars engraved
Sliced from devil worship my hearts depraved
I never knew life like this man I just hate it all
Sometimes I need a L to cuss n escape it all
Discuss with trust and let it fall from my head
So I don't end up dead for something I said
While buggen out drunk in visionin' flashbacks
Lettin' em clash with anything my fist reacts
Next to a mail box a wall a face a car or a floor
Damn I know that these memories are for sure
The shrooms might have intensified them all
So now I think I'm crazy with no time to stall
I look up to the sky askin' for what reason
But all I sees smoke that got my eyes blood bleedon

So my niggas don't glance
just Read up analyze my stance
And read it right away and feedback ... feedback ... feedback

edited for your own good , thank me

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Spitten' The Truth In Streets Of LA

Yo bro..

Ima do you a favour because i liked your piece so much i'm not goonna DQ' you in all 3 of your battles that you asked people to vote but ima give you a chance.

and drop a link... to the open mic you replied to or ima close this

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Not quite legendary yet....

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1489260

My bad bro .. i'm a newbie so u gotta understand me man .. didn't know the rules now i do .. here is my reply to an open mic and have voted on a # of battles as far as battles go .. thanks for the change man and i won't repeat dat mistake .. thanx for the feed too .. peace brotha

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Spitten' The Truth In Streets Of LA

i liked that shit, it had real nice structure and all...keep it up

nice drop nice open mic
the structure was good
it matches with ya title 50/50
umm ya overall good

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Guess who?...

...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

i liked that shit it was tight, peace 1luv

thanx people .. uppin .................................................. ............................

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Spitten' The Truth In Streets Of LA

nice drp man, liked it a lot ya gotta post more of that shit.

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IM BACK BITCHES

uppin fo a second time .................................................. ................................

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Spitten' The Truth In Streets Of LA

uppin yo .................................................. .................................................

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Prior minority now higher authority, I try rule the block
But some fool shot a glock, hey yall not cool to cock
A pistol or a hot missile, my body supported by my buttock
When I git to sit down, so my rear part is sincere art no fart
Placed in a position have to face competition and disgrace
Is not tradition, sometimes grab a vase
Of crisp flowers get girls and kiss for hours then nab lace
Look the back of my coat has a very whack quote reads
“Best rapper”

uppin this again .................................................. .................................

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Spitten' The Truth In Streets Of LA

yo dat shit was decent dawg
i liked tha multi's u had in there
vocab was aight
so overall dat was a decent drop
keep it up and return da fav
leave me some feed back on my shit

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LYRICALLY KILLIN BITCHES

drop me the link hommie and will return tha fav ... peace hommie ...................................

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