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08-12-04, 03:54 PM
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my everything...check it out
IP: 88C4 C811
your breath is the air that i breathe
you're more than human, you're my everything the sound of your voice keeps me trusting you're more than human, you're my everything the purity of your heart, brings me love you're more than human, you're my everything you're smile calms the storms above you're more than human, you're my everything your touch heals all my pains you're more than human, you're my everything you wipe away my blood stains you're more than human, you're my everything you're eyes, are what makes the sunrays so bright you're more than human, you're my everything and you're beauty brings the stars out at night you're more than human, you're my everything you're presence keeps me from doing wrong you're more than human, you're my everything and your love inspired me to write this song you're more than human, you're my everything tell me what yall think Last edited by Devin Samuel 3 : 08-13-04 at 12:17 AM. |
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08-13-04, 03:02 AM
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Light Weight
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IP: 3158 0B2B
it was iight...kina got tired of seein da repeated thing...didn't really feel it in dis drop...but it was still a decent read...had alot of emotion in it and some good vocab...return da favor peace...
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